Not to be much of a debbie downer, but besides some school projects and one failed fanfiction idea. This is my first time really writing, and so I just been winging it and slowly improving. So eventually it will get better, or so I hope but I been learning a few more things.
In regards to the lack of choices, that’s fully me on me, and I will have to add more choices and the usage of the personality stats.
I do plan to do something with it and I will add to the description.
I will add some related choices and information on that, but due to certain things that I am building to, pressure off wouldn’t be one of those things.
I was trying to small sprinkles that the PC’s family is mega rich.
These set of events are intentional, I am trying to explore a theme there.
This I can work on.
This is might just be a coding issue, I will check on it later but can you tell me some of the broad areas where it happened.
Depending on which scenes you are talking about, I either wrote it like that intentionally like the knight comments as it’s more unisexual in nature, but I may have just written it wrong in others.
The prince thing was out of the PC’s control, it was a nickname that Jessica gave the player and it stuck as an inside joke. With the new changes that will be implemented, Maleirene will be the prince on female routes.
Pardon me for being a bit forgetful here, but which gift? the one for Irene’s party as a child. I didn’t include it as the PC, themselves didn’t pick the gift but the parents.
I been told and I am working on it.
This is because I have a nasty habit of well rewriting stuff, publicly this is the third version of the story, and behind doors its like the 6th? So instead of delaying stuff and adding/changing heavy chunks of the story, I am going to do it slowly in batches. This way it doesn’t effect the other stuff.
In the confines of this fictional world, Male and Females are seen as equal in certain sports. In American football, for example, though they aren’t as physically strong as some of the guys, they are seen as capable of playing in a unisex and female team capacity.
It is, the best way to put it is that when the story was first being created, there was Irene and there was the player. A lot has changed since then, but not Irene and the player’s relationship.
Because it is, I rather post it, get feedback and slowly improve. (part of the reason I was rewriting so much.) For now, I will write everything and then rewrite it for the final draft.
