Noted!
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Glad to hear it, will prob add the quotes next update
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Thanks. What makes it unique? What parts did you particularly like?
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It’s just very rare to have a high elf centered story with a high elf MC of pretty good status dealing with humans instead of the other way around.
It’s a bit short to really judge beyond that yet but I think you’ve got a good thing started.
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Love the concept! It’s so cool and fun! Very rare to see an interactive fic with a tolkien-esque setting!
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Thank you for the feedback! I am trying to create something a little different, yes, glad some people appreciate it
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Uploaded a new file with the first update! Current word count - around 14K. Enjoy
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Nice, always cool to see progress.
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A few questions. Can we get a list of the planned ROs and is there a option for poly with the first one we start off with?
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Hmm, frankly, I don’t even know who all the ROs will be yet. But I’m sure there won’t be more than 4 total, because that would be too much branching. So far, two characters are confirmed romantic options. Vanya is 100% going to be a RO, as well as the mysterious sorceress who MC meets in the dream at the end of the current demo.
As for the others, I’m not there yet to be able to say! But I will probably include a list once there are at least three known ROs.
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I read the demo and must say, this holds quite alot of potential. Especially as a Tolkien fan this was amazing work. The only problems was no save option and slight grammer errors here and there but overall I enjoyed this thoroughly and hope to see an update to this coming soon. Nice work! 
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Enjoy, and please comment on anything you find notable as I am still learning how to make a good game, and this is my first time with a project like this. Cheers!
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Overall I am impressed with the new update! sorry for missing it though but I must say this story is going way above my expectations! I just cant wait for the next episode since this is absolutely amazing work! I honestly was afraid that work on this story ended but am VERY glad the project isnt death and eagerly await the next update. Until then I will read the story and updates again and again just to feel the story more to my heart! This isnt something you should read in a whimp! I congragulate you and hope to keep a very close eye on this forum! Again this story was EPIC
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Thank you for playing and giving feedback I truly appreciate it! Yeah the project went on a hiatus when I decided rebuilding it on another system and got burnt out learning Twine + rewriting everything 
Then life happened and you know how it goes. But I came back to it, and plan to continue as I’m able! I also started a Tumblr for this game 
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Im really glad you came back! I honestly am happy to look up to something whenever I come to the forum because Ive been reading it before the update again and again because I can see the work you put it in there. Overall this was an EPIC comeback! Hope you this project turns out a very successful story!
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are all the ro’s going to be women?
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You should change your tags a bit, twas hard to find this topic in the forums. But that aside amazing game 10/10, def one of my top 3 despite being in its early stages, hope you don’t abandon the game as what happens to most great games
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Mostly but maybe not, I’m not fully decided yet. Generally there will be deeper relationships with men as well but it might be more bromance like, like in Tolkien, or it could steer into optional romance. I haven’t gotten there yet in short!
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Thank you!
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I’ll look into it! Though there are real reasons why I can’t use the best tags which is that my project is no longer in choice script so to be honest I’m happy the thread wasn’t removed entirely, it took some negotiation with a friendly mod even to keep this up as a Twine thing.
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