Ok, I will send you an invitation soon.
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@L.D.nunes Found this: line 1430: No selectable options
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Unfortunately there is not much I can do about this bug, but I think the scenes there should work normally, the bug occurs because of the replay attempt, when you go back to the route choices and try to go again on the route, the route should disappear after the person has clicked on it but I am still trying to fix that, for now I just ask you all to ignore the route after it has been chosen or it might bug.
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If this is the case, it makes it even stranger that the father of the MC would both be alright with the potential that the relationship would get serious or with faking the courtship in such a way as to lead people to believe that it is a possible alliance in the first place.
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Actually not so much, even if a child is not born with elemental powers, Eleazar could be even more excited, because in mcās family there are many non-elemental warriors who have become very famous and skilled, even without powers, and a child who can prove to be a very good and skilled warrior, even without powers, would be an even greater achievement and more fame for mcās and Eleazarās house, therefore more fear and respect for them as well.
Of course it would depend on training and so on, but still, even if he is just an ordinary human, he would still be of Eleazarās blood and could have elemental grandchildren afterwards. This has been proven many times in the mc family, no wonder they are so feared or hated, they have always been excellent, elemental or not. And Eleazar could see there a golden opportunity ,to show again that even those without powers can be as skilled as those who haveā¦ if the mc would let him train or even the mc train the child, it would also depend more on the mcā¦
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Thats actually a pretty common misconception. For the Greeks engaging in homosexual behavior was generally confined to pederasty and even then it wasnāt without itās critics. They even had their own slurs for gay men and called them kinaidos. They were often the butt of jokes and in Athens for example could be denied citizenship as the Greeks considered a who allowed his desire to overcome his rational mind was behaving animalistically. They considered them lower than women and we all should know that Greek men didnāt have too high an option of women at that time.
Iām not trying to make any moral judgements with this post on Greeks or LGBTQ people. Just pointing out that the Greeks werenāt really gay in the modern sense.
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Whoa, is that new cover art, or am I just blind and never noticed?
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Hehe itās new 
, I did a small poll on Tumblr to see which one people liked better as the cover art and here is the brand new cover and title.
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I like the story so far. Why did you choose fatherās name to be Eleazar? I liked this name before finding it in your story. It means āGod has helpedā and there was a warrior of king David. He continued to fight while his allies were fleeing. He won.
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Hello! And itās great that you liked it, thank you! And Thatās awesome! I didnāt know there was a warrior of King David with that name, Iāll have to look it up in the Bible later. As for the meaning of the name, I remember seeing it on some website about meanings and names, itās pretty cool to note.
To be honest, I named the character after a character from the Twilight saga. I thought the name was pretty and used it for the character, although the name for mcās father was supposed to be different, but I ended up changing it to Eleazar later on.
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Just finished the update and i really liked all the parts added! It was nice fleshing out of everything. Of course there are a lot of spelling mistake and grammar issues, and some sentences not making sense but I read in a previous comment about how you use a translator so that makes sense for some parts not being the most coherent but itās not hard to figure out what you are trying to say. canāt wait for the next update! You are killing it!!
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Thank you very much! I hope to post the rest of the update soon and thanks for understanding too, I just hope this translator is better than the previous one, I hope
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I have to say when Iām reading a story and the grammar is just really bad I try to give the story a chance until I cant take it anymore. So looking at my old saves I played the demo back in march but I donāt believe I finished it back then due to how hard it was to understand. But I will say coming back almost 2 months later, in that short amount of time the grammar has improved tremendously. Yes, there are still some grammar issues but they werenāt that bad to the point of taking the immersion out of the game. When the grammar is corrected and the game is further along and more fleshed out this will be a good one.
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Well, I have to thank you for that then 
for giving the game a second chance. I understand that the grammar was really bad, even I noticed the errors after rereading in English, but I intend to re-translate everything with the new translator, which apparently made a significant improvement to the text. Iāll do this when the new demo is released in the adult category, and I plan on adding many new things. I should also thank my beta testers, they helped me a lot too. And With the new translator, I hope youāll be able to enjoy it better when the first chapters are better translated, and thank you very much
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Keep up the good work.
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Hey, I really dig your story!
But yeah, I gotta agree that there are lots and lots of grammar and tense errors happening there. But overall, great job so far! Will see if I could help later!!!
Oh, and hereās a piece of advice: I wouldnāt put too much trust in the translator, ya know? It could totally mess up your writing style and make it sound like a robot. Beep boop beep!. I suggest you work on boosting your grammar skills by getting a better grasp of the rules. It will really make a difference, my friend!
Best of luck to you! Iāll definitely be keeping an eye on this.
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Hello! Thank you very much, and also for offering help. And I know exactly what you mean, the two translators I used before even changed meanings and even excluded complete sentences, that was something even I noticed and look, my English is basic, even though Iām learning to read more in English, writing is very different but thank you, and I hope you can enjoy and understand better the next updates, thank you again.
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When I picked to wear the āElegant, a dark blue tunic with black pantsā our father still responded as if Iām wearing red.
And when picking the āElegant, a dark red dress with golden details that reached just below the kneeā he responded the same as when I pick something blue.
The personality choice I feel like should be a sooner one because itās cool to see the different ways your MC could think or respond to things around them plus it makes the MC feel less 2D when it comes to the world around them.
There needs to be more than one choice to pick when flirting because saying āYes, to be honest.ā to missing Hayden doesnāt fit with being very shy to me or fit with how those two have acted so far.
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Hello! And thank you for letting me know, Iāll take a look and correct it later.
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Regarding the issue of personality and responses, thank you for the suggestion, I noticed that too but I ended up forgetting to add some more things, but I will bring more stoic, grumpy, and other choices soon in the update. Regarding the question of personality, this is something that I plan to bring more at the beginning when I release the new demo. However, there are already some differences in a few small moments at the start, but I will bring more of this and with more differences depending on each personality type. Thank you again Feel free to let me know anything.
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