This update was great! I had a lot of fun with it and am excited for more to come with the other flights!
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Thank you.
And on a small note:
On the blog Iāve gotten feedback that the game feels to lack choices and is a bit info dump-y.
If you play as a red dragon thatās on purpose. Not letting the whelp have much agency but instead keep talking over them and prioritizing other things is meant to feel suffocating, I hope this comes across better once I got the other paths in ^^;
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Tbh, I have seen longer stuff per page. On my phone nothing exceeds over 3 scrollings, (if you know what I mean with that)
But then again I never saw it that way, so maybe I have lost what to much is. As I do Like getting to learn more about a world. And world building in general. And for me at least it felt natural the way they told us about the world. As it makes sense we donāt know much as an just freshly Hatched dragoon.
And with how our āparentsā treat us. (Alerhon best grumpy dad.) Itās really concise the feeling of they just dumbing all that on you.
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Canāt wait for the other paths to be updated, curious about the other ones tbh
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The asker felt thereās too little for the players to do (lack of choices), though as said, thatās on purpose.
Kassias would probably scold the whelp for interrupting the tale, and I think it would also take away from the punch of it all being on purpose to force Alerhon to tell what happened to Ferhon and Salbri.
Weāll see what it feels like when other paths are available (you will always get that history lesson from Astia, regardless of flight)
On a different note for those that missed it:
I posted some heroforge mock-ups of Alerhon, Astia and Kassiasā mortal guises in the first post.
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Writing a bit of noodle incident in the green path when you encounter a dryad at the Grove.
And Iām trying to decide whether or not her Queen is the Queen of Elms or the Queen of Swallows. The latter would open a quite distinct reason why Alerhonās in trouble with said Queen, though am I that immature?
cough
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Make it a choice? Then those of us that are definitely that immature can have the joke and those that like to pretend weāre not can save it for a playthrough we donāt tell anyone about.
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Canāt really make it a choice, as the noodle incident is that said Queen still holds a grudge with Alerhon over something heās done thousands of years back.
I think Iāll go with the immature bit first, and wait for feedback :3
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