Art Of Simping Jade Beauties 🍃

[tmaty]

@kizzygm

Little brother, what do you take me for? Ofcause I did…I sent…who’s that boy…" She turns to face lady Lu, as she struggles to recall a name.

@kizzygm

The tip slowly and uncurls, almost invitingly and you take a step closer towards it.

@kizzygm

“I wouldn’t do that, if I were you.” A now familiar voice, sounds behind you and you turn ro face the woman, who invited you into the bathhouse and meet her eyes once again.

Arigatou, I added the changes. Which will be shown in like probably the next update.

@kizzygm

How many Ros and can the be a description list

Still a bit undecided about this but I have a vague image of about five female characters influencing the story. The description thing is kinda a good idea, will see about how to go about it.

@kizzygm

One more thing is this a harem,

And I am still not fully decided about the relationship stuff, but I don’t see this story going that route… because of the simping thing, I am picturing the women having more power over mc in terms of relationship dynamics. but like I said it is a bit vague for now…so will see how it goes/unfolds.

Arigatou Gozaimasu!!! for the suggestions and edits

[tmaty]

@chazers

I did like him enough to stand playing a heterosexual, tho I’m not all that interested in the romance or the ladies

Arigatou, and I will add more single/bachelor routes. Also serious about working on another cultivation route that will accomodate but I am trying to learn to not start too many stories at once, so will begin writing it once I am at least done with this one.

[tmaty]

@DiGreatDestroyer

ngl, the premise/setting sounds interesting, but it does not inspire confidence to see you have 8 other listed WIPs…

@tmaty

“I’m going to complete all the wips I have started.” - Is the hill that I intend to stand on.

Have a lil bit of hope…

[dennisloaf]

Like it so far! Keep it up!

I do have a question why on the use of ‘Name-San’, I don’t have an issue with it just am surprised by the usage in an IF that ostensibly a lot of Chinese influence

[tmaty]

@dennisloaf

Like it so far! Keep it up!

Arigatuo !! !! !! !! !! !!

@dennisloaf

the use of ‘Name-San’

And it’s actually a mixture of influences, mainly between Cultivation dramas and Isekia anime (the exp stats).

[Queen_Zelda]

I read a bit of it and it’s really great. Unfortunately I’m a girl and straight, so I’m not interested in this one. But I wish you the best in continuing and having lots of fun with it!

[tmaty]

@Queen_Zelda

Unfortunately I’m a girl and straight

And arrgg, my apologies for that…

when I was mapping it out, adding more than one gender made the storyline seem soooo insane (as in too many variables that I feel comfortable keeping track of).

@Queen_Zelda

But I wish you the best in continuing and having lots of fun with it!

Thank youuu so much. Really appreciate the encouragement

[Kristian_Herron]

Keep going

[tmaty]

Arigatou Kristian_Herron… means a lot.

Will try to update this week.

[Blessing_BLX]

Caught my attention I will come back here with a feedback

[tmaty]

We shall await your return.

[tmaty]

Art of Simping Jade Beauties (update)

'Guys are bedazzled DIVAS!' #tyla #nonchalant #diva

Hey y’all, it’s a been a while as per-usual… slow paced writing with a bit scattered focus… However we are back once again (HOSH​!!!)…

So the updated scenes kinda revolve around the Fuo route…So for those who chose the route of meeting Fuo. The bath-house scene has been completed and the next scenes, will feature “acquiring” new robes, due to the events that transpired within the bath-house (ahem-ahem), and then hopefully followed by going to the market, in order to return back to the main branch…

Here are a few scenes that stood out a lil…

So we get a glimpse/brief interaction with Madam Senior again…and while writing her scenes I found myself occasionally thinking about two characters…

Granny Si

【ENGDUB】🔥The Cowherd's Dark Odyssey | Tales of Herding Gods | Official Trailer | YOY Animation

Who is from a donghua that I have recently started watching…

As well as…

Toph

Toph Tribute - Bad Guy

Tore Up - "Prime" Toph Beifong EDIT

Especially when she became older, because they both kinda give off the feel that despite seeming like an unassuming elder, they seem to be capable and to know more than they should…

^^^^^We are also briefly introduced to a new character…

Lady Ciuh

Despite having been born into a family that doesn’t own very much, she still tries to keep up a bubbly and cheerful personality on days that her will power is strong enough to navigate her financial circumstances…

I found myself thinking that perhaps on days that she feels overwhelmed by her circumstances, she turns towards romantic relationships, to distract herself…

Perhaps in another life, she would have been born a kitchen cook OR a rich merchant’s shy daughter.

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On a slightly different topic, I have recently come across concept of zines…and have been doing a lil sumn-sumn, if I don’t say so myself… or trying to atleast. Here are a few images of how the document looks like:

In the document, the links should be clickable, in order to give the interactive fiction feel… the zine thingy contains a few snippets here and there…

Anyway, that’s kinda the update for now… feel free to download the document/zine if you are interested…which is over at my patreon (tmaty | Thato Matabane) and do take care.

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A BIT EXTRA THINGS: If there are those who don’t know what zines are, you can check out this youtube video:

I’m BEGGING You To Make Zines

And then if you would like to make your own zine, I thought the following youtube video to be an easy guide:

Creating a Digital Zine in Canva

[kizzygm]

For some reason demo ends when I try to talk to the maid sweeping no matter what I do.

#{name}-San!!!" He exclaims with every droplet that he notices on his attire. “Never in all my lives, did I think I would have to defend against a naked man, in one of them.”

Now… (mca)**…now… (mca)[/]*** little Kuáng, you know I care about you." She speaks to you while chewing the strawberry in her mouth into tiny bits. "So I will never make you do something that you can’t handle.*

Found these typos

[tmaty]

@kizzygm

For some reason demo ends when I try to talk to the maid sweeping no matter what I do.

Nah you not doing anything wrong, if you choose to wear well tailored robes, that’s where the story ends.

In order to read the updated/alternate route, you have to choose to wear your older robes that are fading in colour before speaking to the maid.

Make sure that in your stat screen, your attire shows dull robes before speaking to the housemaid.

Then the conversation will go like that… “hopefully”…

@kizzygm

Found these typos

And arigatou… much appreciated…

[tmaty]

@tmaty

that’s where the story ends.

At the momemt…lol, had to add that incase there’s misunderstanding. Hopefully I will be able to connect the routes/branches.

[kizzygm]

What thing does sis and su got going on? Are they friends or friends ?

[tmaty]

@kizzygm

What thing does sis and su got going on? Are they friends or friends ?

[kizzygm]

Is mc adopted bc as the reader I’m like " two baddies cuddling is a heavenly sight to come home to. And I’m wandering why sisi has relations bar with the other Ros but if mcs not adopted then damn

[tmaty]

@kizzygm

Is mc adopted bc as the reader I’m like

Okay, this I can answer before the rumours start…Your sister is your sister (louder for those in the back) … YOUR SISTER IS YOUR SISTER!!

Relationship bar however is more about whether you will manage to reconcile things the sister, because kinda planning to create a branch or route from that. Also I feel like mentioning her with the others gives a bit of structure to the ranking of “the beauties”…

[kizzygm]

OK bc I was CONFUSED why she was there