It looks very promising! I really liked the premise/writing style, and this is my favorite kind of MC to play as (I always had a soft spot for the morally gray and dangerous characters, you see). Looking forward to the next chapters.
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quite interesting, definitely something with huge potential
Thanks for the typos and the kind words! They’ll be fixed with the next update😊
Can’t wait for the next update 
This game already has a great start and potential. I always like a game that involves robots, especially if we are one, and you went even further by making the MC an extremely dangerous and emotionally unstable Military Combat Unit. I just loved the idea. After this, I definitely have to follow your work. 
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Thank you so much! Im working hard on chapter 1 so i hope you’ll likr how the story continues!
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Cool W.I.P! I love the concept behind this and the writing in the demo was awesome, really fits the theme of being a monster.
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The demo is short but I like it so far.
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It is too short for a real critique. As it is, I’m not a fan of the main character’s mindset or lack of motive.
“Careful not to cut yourself on that edge.”
I’m not dissuaded by a darker psyche, Pop. 1280 and Flashman rank among my favorite reads, however the lack of context is troubling.
Hopefully the next release will provide dramatis personae and greater threats for our kill bot to bounce off of. It delivers the requisite customization ribbons but the KSA demonstration leaves much to be desired.
I’m sad to say, I don’t feel much reason to revisit, sans mystery box or dialogue.
You are a murder machine with no motive or character.
When I return, I hope that won’t be the case.
Im sorry you dont find much to like so far but it is just the prologue. You literally are thrown in the cold water on purpose. You dont know anything bcs you are supposed to be a fish out of water for the prologue. The story rly begins in chapter one where alot of other things will be addressed. I appreciate the feed back but please keep in mind it is just the prologue.
Hey guys sorry yo announce this but ill have to take a break from writing for awhile! I just onhured my left hand badly and for that cant rly use it! Im so sorry i was truly looking forward to write the next few days and get the update out:sweat:
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wishing for you to have a speedy recovery and take all the time you need to heal and get back to 100% 
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You don’t need to apologize for something like this bro, I hope you get well soon. And when you recover…
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The prologue was great. Right from the start I was drawn in by the MC. How you wrote the pov and the exit from the building was epic. I loved the choices, it really gave me insight on the MC mind and personality. I am really looking forward to seeing the continuation of this WIP. Great work!
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Thank you all for the kind words! I hope that my ahnd recovers quickly so i can give you guys what ive been cooking up soon😁
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It’s good! I hope I could high five you so your hand would recover.
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I have a question. Should we a machine that see themselves as perfection/above humanity, be able to chose at the gender selection question to just feel like a machine or something?
Does 006 look human or not
The thing about this here is that 006 doesnt want to be seen as an object anynore so they made thier own identity as who they are. They basically wanted to be more human in that regard! Hope that answers it for you😊
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Well they kind of do and kind of dont. It will be explained more in chapter 1! There is were character creation also takes place
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