Was pretty buggy for me, well, it was mostly repeating itself. Like when Rainn comes to the apartment and you choose between staying and hiding, one scenario happened then went back into the other one.
M and A still my picks, depending on how the Taner stuff play out C might be another contender.
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Is there a bug choosing lori and jack at the club?
Is there a way the link on the first post can be updated to the new one?
Probably need to ask a Mod, as this is not the authorās thread. Iāll throw a note at Harris about it.
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Thanks! Iāve edited the initial post with the correct link (though I donāt know the wordcount so have left that as is).
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Thanks a bunch!
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When you are at the club and it gives you options to see Lori from the lunch spot and Jack from the takeout spot, both options lead to Jack.
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Yeah, the author is aware so itāll hopefully get fixed with the next update sheās working on.
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I normally donāt read this kinda stuff, but I liked how mysterious and ominous the lack of explanation text on the forum made me curious. So I looked at the thunderstorm outside and clicked on it hoping this would become the worlds most immersive creepy pasta. It wasnāt but thereās no going back now so onwards.
I wrote these as I blindly read the texts, so if I say something thatās corrected later my bad.
MCās job takes up a significant portion of the story. The job is a vehicle for the plot. Logically, I will have to take creative liberties in order to support the plot/narrative. In other words, the jobs will not be a complete reflection of real life. This is still fiction. Please keep that in mind! 
Man someone must have put in aheckuva lawsuitā¦ But I also like the smile, I donāt think I saw that in a HG before now, though Iām sure thereās some obvious one Iām missing.
Dearā¦
Grace.
Ryan.
Asher.
(Input first name.)
I know itās not a huge deal, but itād be good to have different name lists for men and women?
ā¦bartender at The Vault.
ā¦musician at The Vault.
ā¦kindergarten teacher at Everglade Elementary.
ā¦high school teacher at Everglade High School.
ā¦anchor at Sunny Morning News Station.
ā¦editor for Aston Publishers.
ā¦artist for The Simpatico.
I like this jobs list
āDarn it.ā
As a former Scouting adventure guide and soon to be cabin counciler Iām more of a āDang itā kinda guy myself but I do like that detail.
āWell, my girlfriend is a lawyer,ā you gush when you grab your suitcase. āVery successful.ā Wait there are three ROās hare, and the MC already has one, oh noā¦
Athena.
502
For some reason, your brain collects the information and tucks it away. Who knows, maybe youāll need it one day.
Man Rainn is gonna get the bad end of some really dark alley isnāt sheā¦
Rainn txtd ne bak. @ bar wit frendz
You sigh. You make a mental note to remind Andi to text like a normal person.
Oh Andi atleast she wonāt drink and drive? Well not a car anywaysā¦
ABANDON HOPE YE WHO ENTER HERE like youāre a main character in a horror movie and the bar is the final boss level to success or eternal doom.
Man this is how I felt seeing the forum post. This is truly immersiveā¦
āMy God youāre a Lawyer donāt you get trained for that?ā
While I do like this scene and line, Shouldnāt God get filtered out in bad language? Into gosh or something? Not for MCs who do use foul language, but for the ones who donāt use it they probably wouldnāt.
āIāll figure it out,ā you bite out.
āFredrickāā
āDonāt,ā you snap and she blinks. āIām fine. Really.ā Are you convincing Rainn or yourself?
Aww poor Fredrickā¦ I mean, he probably should have asked before moving in as love or not something that important shouldnāt be a surprise. Nonetheless, I do like the emotion.
Rainnās response is immediate: āNo.ā
You nod, gazing away.
You canāt imagine this being your last conversation with Rainn. It canāt be. Not after so much time together.
Again poor Fredrick
Her eyes widen, and then you catch the unfamiliar flare of anger rise up on her face. āNo. Why would you even ask that?ā
You shrug. āI just had to know.ā
I also liked seeing the differences between the questions.
(Pick special attribute) (Choose as many as you like or none at all.)
These are good choices, but a scar would be a nice choice please. I have mine, not as visible as it used to be but still Iād probably be looking at (admittedly I kinda miss it.) Partially because of the tale of how I got it but still. Either way scars would be a neat little addition please.
Well transition scars in the next page technically count so I probably should have mentioned āface scars.ā
ā¦a bat. I donāt want to kill them.
Again the dream was nice(ly sad) but you can definitely kill someone with a blunt instrument. I wonāt go into detail because the rest of the scene is good but I donāt think breaking bones, including the ribs, pelvis, or skull is the epitome of pacifism. Unless youāre Batman in which case the Bat is on point man.
Plus, she drives a Tesla. Thatās not even a red flag, itās a neon sign."
The guy sheās with frowns. āI like Teslas.ā
She raises her palm to his face before gesturing between them. āPlease donāt ruin this for me.ā
She starts shedding her jacket and tosses her purse on the couch. You watch her disappear in the bathroom, only hearing her voice. āYou can stay as long as you need. Itās cool if Derek stays over, right? Derek is my boyfriendā¦for now.ā
I love them alreadyā¦
Though Iām not sure why youād have a car in NYC? Or any electric one in the good parts of New York.
āI visited Oklahoma once,ā Lani says neutrally. āCanāt tell you a single memory from that trip since I was blacked out drunk for most of it.ā
Depending on their love of bougie downtown hipster drinks and/or cheap binge drinking in the backroads, that was probably the most overpriced or dangerous trip ever. I prefer the secondā¦
You know no one. Your roommates are strangers. A co-worker at your job still hates you. And you know no one.
Poor Fredrickā¦
āSoā¦a unique dump?ā Athena says and raises an eyebrow.
You laugh despite yourself. āYeah, exactly that.ā
Man Iāve seen a lot of thoseā¦
Well what I read wasnāt exactly my taste but from an objective stand point itās good. I mostly started out of curiosity and continued on in the name of sunk costs. I do want to see the end of the WIP though if only in the name of said sunk costs and it being unique.
I liked the drama of it, and my favorite part was the slow realization of whatās going on with both Rainn and being homeless were my favorite parts. Iāve been in both of those trenches (well not in Rainnās trench but I wouldnāt want to be there either.)
In all seriousness those emotions were convead well.
Also this isnāt a critique moreso something funny that happened but for once when I heard or saw the MC even though it was my name and descriptor, I kept imagining this guy
I dunno why, maybe because I wouldnāt do the things the MC does? In fact I did just about the opposite, which is why I left the citiy for the before mentioned camp jobs. There is several novels worth of more to the story I was just saying that because I thought youād like to know.
I loved this game so much and I accidentally became hyper fixed on it and drew all the characters 
I found it on this website called cog demos, does anyone know where I can find the rest? Iām actually obsessedā:tired_face: I finished it all with a dayā:grimacing:
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What website is best to play the game? Because Iāve been using cogdemos.com currently and Iām looking for a better alternative 
Iām afraid what you can find on the cogdemos is all there currently is. The author is working on the next chapter, but thereās no word at this point when itāll be finished/available.
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A month later and I realize I forgot to actually play the update 
lmao
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there was a update ?
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I also forgot. Even tho I really like this one. How did I miss it? 
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Yeah last month i think!
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Is there? One on cogdemos is dated April.
Anyway. I feel it would be polite to thank Apt 502 for doing the impossible, aka making me to loathe a fictional character almost as if they were a real life politician. Rainn, darling, if someone sets you on fire as you absolutely deserve 
, Iām not even going to piss on you, and Iām going to play the shit out of this game if it allows me to make your life if not hell, then at least a public toilet next to beer fest with ongoing diarrhea outbreak.
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I think thatās they one they mean. It was posted at the end of April so yeah, more of 3 months than one. Time flies sometimes. /s
Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that was my cry when the demo finished after meeting Aā:sob:
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