Any promotions happening in story?
There is one so far.
From Captain to Major
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Minor Update!
Rewrites are going smoothly. I’ve decided I won’t update the demo until I’ve rewritten most of everything leading upto Chapter 4. On an unrelated note, in my time not writing this, I’ve been working on a smaller project that I’m excited to share with you all in the coming weeks/months. It’s something similar in style to this, but in a very different era covering a very small but intense period of time.
hint hint, the 1960s…
Thank you all for the continued support! Don’t stop leaving feedback, it’s been ESSENTIAL.
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Is it the Vietnam war? Or something else?
I’m thinking ether the Vietnam war or the 6 day war do to him saying it covers a very small but intense period of time
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If it’s Nam you need to include a character named McCoy who bears a striking resemblance to Chuck Norris, and one John Rambo.
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This looks great, I have been looking forward to more IFs based in real wars
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Alright everyone, as promised, here’s the link to my other, new WIP I’ve been messing about with while concurrently working on this beauty. I’m still very deep into working on this project, but with all the new post-grad time I’ve been enjoying, I’ve been quietly working on this other passion project on the side. Enjoy!
Also - expect an updated demo for A Nation Divided soon 
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Ok so reading through the demo I do have some feedback. So I think it’s the last battle before you go to DC and one of the options is “I want to lead from the front with my sword drawn” or something to that effect and you get on your horse which leads to you and your horse getting unceremoniously shot and the assault momentum breaking. I understand this outcome because you made yourself just too juicy a target for enemy sharpshooters by doing that. However I’d imagined my character as a smart officer that still kept his wits sharp but wasn’t ready to lead from behind yet (like Richard Winters in Band of Brothers) so having that as the only ‘going into the fight’ option so to speak feels limiting. I feel like there should be another option something like “I shall advance with the colors” where you still go into the fight but aren’t immediately shot since an officer that has been in two or three battles up to that point should know that skirmishers are very very lethal and that he shouldn’t present himself easily. But otherwise the rest of the demo was very good.
On a side note how does one get their wounds healed?
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Wounds would be healed in between acts, in my mind 
Also excellent feedback, I think I have a dice system in place for that choice where depending on some stats you can escape in one piece, I have to check
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