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Played two times and always ends with this, just after “escaping” aliens.
BTW love the game ^^
I get exactly the same error message as @dreamdragonhatchling when trying to load chapter three.
Apologies, I had copied over the first 3 chapters from the full game instead of using the demo version so it didn’t stand alone very well. It should work fine now, although you will still be stopped at the end of chapter 3.
@Pyromanci I love this game so far. How long is the completed version?
@addicted It came out at a bit over 275000 words, thats 6 chapters plus pro and epilogue. I wanted to add more, but I was already well over my original time plan. Also if I took any more caffeine pills I might not have lived to see it published…
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@Pyromanci haha. 275,000 words is great! I can’t wait to play the full version. Do you know when it will be released?
Sadly it’s in the hands of the almighty Apple. If I am lucky I might get a 10 minute warning before it appears on itunes.
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BEIC
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I think I found an XCOM reference in-game lol.
Enjoyable piece, can’t wait for more.
Keep up the good work Pyro. 
This WIP is absolutely great…cannot wait for updates? final version
Harian
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This is a pretty well constructed WIP…
But wait, with regards to the minor crossover, does that mean Zombien and Zombie Exodus are both set in the same continuity?
It is already complete just waiting on Apple to release it.
No. It is just a nod to the creator. Only that scene is shared.
Will there be an google play / regular web release?
Hey, thanks for all the praise. Sorry I haven’t been checking as often as usual. Putting together the demo for You Dunnit (my next story) is taking all of my attention.
Also TY TheMeek for answering the questions for me.
Finally sorry Shell_San, I have no clue as to the release details. Basically once I submitted and signed the contract the whole thing was out of my hands. I would assume it’ll come out in all the ways hosted games usually do, but that’s the best I can do really.
“Hey, you’re not a cop” Says the man.
A
big man, both in height and width. In his 40’s you would guess, with
the woman being around half his size and about the same age. They look
friendly enough, if a little confused and dazed. You decide extra
friendly would make them feel more at ease. You step forward and offer
the man your hand.
“Nope sorry, just a Soldier. I’m James, pleased to meet you.”
seems a bit weird,with other jobs it would fit, but with Soldier i would expect a bit different reaction.
second thing, it seems a bit weird to be a Soldier and have to hack into the military. should you have access ?
It looks like Zombien has been published! I bought my copy on Android, rated it 5 stars and shared it on Google +, and I’ll make an announcement about it on the HG FB page whenever it shows up on the CoG website. I’m only a little bit of the way through (right after my attractive neighbor got killed) but I’ve got some feedback.
1.) There seem to be a lot of grammar errors, mainly to do with sentence fragments and non-use of commas. You might wanna proofread this. Also, keep in mind that the word directly after a dialogue quote has to be lower case, and that you need to separate different people’s dialogues into separate paragraphs. Not to mention that there were a few glaring typos. I would point them out specifically, but I was away from my computer when I noticed them.
2.) I think, especially in a zombie story, a “moral” stat would be a nice addition.
3.) The writing seems to be witty, which is enjoyable.
I’ll give you more feedback as I go.
Thanks for the support. I was pretty nervous about the release, it only seems to be out for android at the moment but the first set of reviews seem positive. Thank god.
Any errors you can find would be greatly appreciated. I am sure it won’t be long before I am called upon to do the first update, and would like to make it as comprehensive as possible. I will consider how to implement a moral stat, although there are currently many places where the morality of your choices affects future choices. I will also consider making it clearer which choices will lead you down which path.
Really glad you are enjoying it!
Zeus
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I was able to get it off App Store yesterday
Okay, I’m a little more of the way through it. I definitely think that the plot overall is creative, and it’s a lot different than most zombie related stories. However, I do have some concerns.
1.) Especially for a title of this length, I think the characters could have a little more development.
2.) There seem to be around 5-10 grammar errors in every page. Most of them aren’t glaring typos, but rather, they deal with the kind of stuff I mentioned in my first post. (Lack of commas, incorrectly formatted dialogue, tons of fragmented sentences.)
3.) Things seem to be very vague most of the time. For instance, we are told what is happening and told that dialogue has occurred, instead of being shown and having actual dialogue and what not.
I am entertained by Zombien, but admittedly, these issues do detract from the overall quality. Don’t take this as a punch to the gut, though. I just want to help you improve it. 
Updates are always looming, you’ll likely find.
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Hey, could a moderator close this thread please. Shouldn’t be needed now the release thread is up.
