With the Jamie freakout, if itâs about a lack of space would there be an option for temp housing when crafting stuff in free space or is it simply just due to the stress of the outbreak getting to him?
Man, this chapter was awesome
Small glitch I noticed with part 3 in general however
Driver and Church die in chapter 9, however, in the transition between chapters 9 and 10, driver and church can still be assigned tasks for some reason.
Also I wanted to ask
How come you canât bring more then five people to the silverthorns camp? You, Jaime, and Rachel already talk about group size when going so it makes no sense that you canât take more then two extra people. I mean taking 7 extra people might be extreme, but it seems a bit weird, considering the fact that Rachel and Jaime both talk about the possibility of a firefight, but the game wonât let you take enough people to handle a firefight
My first set of notes:
Minor stuff
Brody kicks his foot against your leg, and there it doesnât hurt, it makes you set up.
I assume this should be: âthough it doesnât hurt, it makes you get/sit up.â
Reilly lets out a huge your, makes himself up, and smiles at you.
I assume this should be ââŚyawn, wakesâŚâ
never waking up once from a nightmare like six of the last days.
This feels oddly phrased; how many days is this supposed to be? Would âlike the last six daysâ work better here?
and hear a rifle fire into the air.
How do you know itâs being fired into the air?
*if (junkyard_defense >= 8) or (watch_duty_woody and (junkyard_defense >= 9))
The second half of this condition is only true if the first half is, so has no effect.
are running low on food," Billie says. âWe may only have enough food for a day or two. But weâre adding food every day, and we can spare some for starving people.â
âadding food every dayâ implies that youâre gaining more than youâre losing, so youâre not ârunning low on foodâ.
Have none to share.
Should not be capitalised.
If any of you want to skip a meal and handed over to them, be my guest.
ââŚhand it over to themâ?
Are almost," Nora says.
ââŚalmost outâ? (Also should note be capitalised.)
*if group_food <= 300
*set rachel_faction %-(round(20-(empathy/6)))
"I'm fine with sharing for now, but I hope this doesn't make a precedent for this group to come back. We can't afford to feed them forever."
*if group_food < 300
"I strongly disagree with giving up food when we have so little."
I think the first one should be >=, and presumably the rachel_faction hit should occur in the second.
Also, it seems weird that rachel_faction would be reduced only some of the time for this choice, but all of the time for the âonly this onceâ choice; surely the slightly more pragmatic choice would at worst be considered equivalent?
I want you to go pick out another food for six people
ââŚenough foodâ?
Youâve all said your peace/Weâve said our peace
I think this should be âpieceâ.
You stare in stunned silence at Rachel as an image of
You get this if youâre in love with Bailey, Jillian, or Lopez, even if theyâre still alive.
A volley of bullets ring off the metal knew you,
ââŚnear youâ?
From your angle, you cannot see beyond the two men in the front of the packâs,
ââŚthe packâ?
You slide along the roof and tried to gain a more optimal view
ââŚtryâ?
@{toss_item poison gas bomb|Molotov cocktail|grenade}
You never set the variable toss_item.
grenadeand pull the pin.
ââŚgrenade andâŚâ
Forest Rats
Is this actually the groupâs name? I assumed it was just an insult from Sean (and I donât think heâs said it yet on this branch).
*label NonLethalJacob
If you taze or pepper spray Jacob, it goes to this label; I think it should be going to *label AfterFRAttack instead.
$group_leader} says.
Should be â${group_leader}â.
I suggest you leave now while you still have the chance. We are a well-armed and well-coordinated group.
This line is duplicated in an @{|}.
This standoff @{(ideal >= 50) gives you just the distraction you need to make your move.|could go on a while, but you need to make a move before one of your group get hurt.}
Is this the right way round?
@{leader Iâm assuming you want to lead?â|Do you want to lead or shall I?â}
Both should start with speech marks.
*if fr_plan > 1
*if m_leadership >= 75
*set group_offense +10
*if m_leadership >= 60
*set group_offense +10
*if m_leadership >= 45
*set group_offense +10
*if m_leadership < 35
*set group_offense +10
Are these supposed to all be the same?
With a running jump, Brody clears his way halfway up the small trailer. His sneakers kick off the wall and propel him upward until his hands can reach the top.
Brody lies on the ground clutching his right arm.
Brody can have already been wounded before this point.
Bailey carries over a blanket and drapes it over Brodyâs legs.
I think this appears even if Bailey just died.
*label AfterMourning
This label contains mourning for Parker and Dante, but itâs Bailey and Lopez who can have died by this point. (Plus Jillian, but thatâs fine.)
He promised after the outbreak, he would give me a special tour of where he works and show me things other kids are allowed to see,
Presumably âarenâtâ.
because he was such a good person and Number of our group.
ââŚmemberâ?
Either we die to the infected were starved to death.
Should there be an âorâ between âinfectedâ and âwereâ?
But thereâs are much taller
Should be âtheirsâ.
Jaime turns to Sean. "I know you were ${firstname}'s neighbor
Only in the suburbs.
With all respect do, we have leadership
Should be âdueâ.
Does Kevin not get to vote about Allison and August?
"Was it a mistake when they killed
*if group_killed_ch7 > 1
our friends?"
*if group_killed_ch7 = 1
*if lopez_killed = 7
Lopez."
*if jillian_killed = 7
Jillian."
*if bailey_killed = 7
Bailey."
*if woody_killed = 7
Woody."
All should end in question marks.
He is a soldier. He will follow orders, and you canât do not his skill set.
Should that be âdenyâ?
that should leave a knock of mouse here at the Junkyard.
I have no idea what this should be.
Rosie may be to excitable to bring on a mission such as this
Should be âtooâ.
But Iâm happy if you want to pick someone house,
ââŚsomeone elseâ?
I wonât deny is smart and confident and knows how to survive.
Should be âheâsâ or âhe isâ.
I donât want him distracted me on this trip.
Should be âdistractingâ.
@{(group_leader = "Rachel") "So what are we doing with Benton?" Jaime asks.|"One last thingââŹâI want to bring Benton on this trip," Jaime says.}
*if kelly_taken
"Absolutely. We need him as leverage to get back Kelly," Rachel says.
This doesnât flow if Rachel is leader and Kelly was taken.
Brody box away from you, letting your hands slip.
Should that be âwalksâ?
âWhile. And to think I liked you.â
Should that be âWellâ?
He lives in close to you and puts an arm around her waist.
Should be âleansâ and âyourâ.
But Iâve been seeing you with main a lot
â${main_ro}â
âI like ${main_ro} just like I like you.â [Lopez]
If Lopez is going to suggest poly, then I donât think this should call LopezEx.
Iâm not going on this trip, but the next time I Keith,
Should be ânext time I see Keithâ.
I wasnât going to@{with_reilly let you|} leave here today
I think the @{|} should be the other way around.
âI like ${main_ro} just like I like you.â [Tommy]
Would Tommy be more okay with poly if the other RO was also a guy? Also, the text of this option implies that main_ro is male, although a bi guy could be dating Tommy and a female RO.
More importantly:
A body lies between the two trailers towards the back corner of the Junkyard.
This is literally right after you leave your room; if Bailey, Brody, Jillian, or Lopez were your main RO and didnât have watch duty, they were left there asleep (or implied to have come out with you). It doesnât make sense for them to have died or been wounded already in the firefight. (Similarly, Rachel, Jaime, Tommy, Madison, and Reilly are mentioned to have already been in the firefight, but can have been in bed with you, too.)
The second_ro jealousy scenes feel weird. Have we even had a chance to establish them as actual romances yet, because I donât remember there being a scene which did that?
âSince we know the location of the Silverthornesâs camp, itâs time to pay them a visit,â you say.
I realise that this is the way the story is going to go, but it seems very out-of-nowhere for an MC who had decided to just stay away from the Silverthornes. You even have a variable sm_plan which could be called to check the playerâs original plan. It would make far more sense for Rachel to suggest it in those cases.
Also, I recall there was some discussion about giving student MCs the chance to romance the twins; has this been added?
not by looking at the tooth of a gift horse, but I found several flaws in the first chapters of Part Three, especially in relation to the junkyard and the survivors (especially when we are going to talk to the River dogs and the option to choose already dead characters to do tasks, without forgetting that the morale of the group is literally 0 in my case and that the improvements that I already made are not reflected)
Can you tell me how do you know Jillian is pregnant?
When mom loves dad very muchâŚ
Sorry i am compelled to make this joke every time someone asks similar questions.
Romance her
Sleep with her in ch8. Apparently, sex makes babies. Who knew?
Worth pointing out that if you get her birth control in chapter 2, she doesnât get pregnant.
Next set of notes.
with_benton is only set true if Kelly wasnât kidnapped, even though the text makes it clear that heâs being brought along.
As your footsteps The floorboards, he arouses awake.
This is a real mess of a sentence.
Boy like that must you out of this place.
Iâm not entirely sure whatâs supposed to be being said here.
*set multiple_vehicles true
This is set if and only if youâre not riding a motorbike, and has no bearing on whether the team is in multiple vehicles.
But he was bit. Thatâs the information you were told by August and Allison.
You only know this if you (or Rachel) specifically ask about his face; otherwise you didnât learn it.
Also, why is everybody acting like weâre there to assassinate Keith, even if we came to negotiate?
Your small caravan makes a U-turn out of line
Appears even if youâre in a single vehicle.
until something happens that summons the other guards to drug guns on them.
ââŚdrawâ?
watchtower just like the one you built back at the Junkyard.
What if you had multiple watchtowers?
they show the look of people dejected by the rest of society.
Should that be ârejectedâ?
especially who looked like theyâre ready to fight.
Maybe â⌠especially (those?) who look likeâŚâ
âWeâre keeping our options open and getting to know this place in case we want to move here,â you say.
Would a truthful MC say this?
I want say a thing.
Should be âwonâtâ.
Give me a sack, and Iâll find it.
I assume this should be âsecâ.
Parker counts a stack of money before handing it over to you unless you know itâs $605.
Should that be ââŚletting you knowâ?
If you canât pay Anders, you can persuade him to let it go, or give him something else. In these cases, you are sent to SpecialTip, where you have to choose how much money to give him, rather than TheTavern, which is where you go after paying him.
#Offer to let him join our group. It's a better lifestyle than living at the camp.
*goto TheTavern
There is no text in this option.
"No. You have a lot of people with you, and I've got a full line trying to getting in. Two hundred or the back of the line."
*goto FlapHub
This should probably go to MoneyHub, not FlapHub.
She steps passed your team and joins them.
Should be âpastâ.
Chat with @{tipped_anders Sylvester the|a} bartender. Maybe one knows where to find Keith.
If you tipped Anders, it should be âheâ.
Normally Iâd say youâre too young to be in a bar, but timeâs have changed.
Should be âtimesâ.
*selectable_if ((add_alc = false) and (w_money >= 20)) #Pass on a drink but give a tip ($20).
Should this increase bar_mod?
#"Tell me where I can find Keith," I say and stare him down, threatening him if necessary.
*set truth %+15
*if (m_leadership + bar_mod) >= 45
Shouldnât this go off m_intimidate instead of m_leadership? (Or both/either?)
Finished with the bartenderâs, you return to your group.
Should be âbartenderâ, or possibly âbartendersâ.
As soon this outbreak ends or this canât falls
Should that be âcampâ?
They keep their eyes mainly on the bar area those a glance from side to side in casual observance.
Not sure what this should be, sorry.
The pair face the bar with complete interest and failed to see you sneaking near them.
Should be âfailâ.
"You told me some story about coming here for rest and relaxation.
Should be âTheyâ.
âThey asked about Keith and wanting to know his whereabouts.â
Should be âwantedâ.
old-style suits or dresses and hates.
Should be âhatsâ.
*allow_reuse #Food (3).
*set w_food +5
Is it 3 or 5 food?
the tide and gagged man among you.
Should be âtiedâ.
That sounds great. Instead Iâll take a grill cheese sandwich on white bread.
âInsteadâ doesnât work here. Would âAlsoâ be better?
#An expensive meal. I want to indulge while we are here.
*set truth %+15
Should this be changing truth?
drinks have to beer,
Should that be âhalf theâ?
He just watches with selling eyes
Iâm not sure what this should be. âSilentâ?
Itâs small but the cheese loses when you bite into it
Not sure what this is supposed to be.
A waitress speed by you with an empty tray.
Should be âspeedsâ.
In the poisoning scene, the waiter/waitress switches gender quite a few times.
*if (m_search >= 55) or ((m_search >= 65) and v_impaired)
...
*elseif (m_stealth >= 55) or ((m_search >= 55) and (m_stealth >= 45))
The second half of the *elseif wonât matter, since anyone with m_search over 55 will pass the *if instead.
Would it make sense to have some text in the drinking contest for teenage MCs?
*if one_question
*if (count = 2) or last_question
If the designated drinker canât drink, last_question is set, but one_question wonât be, so the questions just continue. This should be a single test: *if (one_question and (count >= 2)) or last_question
(60 - ((count - 1) * 10)))
Is this right? The threshold starts high and gets lower, making it easier to pass in successive turns. Surely it should be the other way round?
He pushes his tongue around his mouth and then pick something out of his teeth.
Should be âpicksâ.
but they werenât as good with them, not believe it or not,"
Delete the first ânotâ.
You look in the moving?
âYou looking into moving?â?
I know where the prettiest gang
âweâreâ
"The name nor the description ring a bell.
Should that start with âNeitherâ?
It didnât help you to side with us at the museum. But weâre willing to give you another chance.
Presumably ânot to side with usâ or âto side against usâ.
But if you wanted us dead, I believe we would be so.
Should be âheâ or âtheyâ.
It wonât be long now before heâs changed."
Delete end quotation mark.
Weâve been worried about sheâs been treated with you."
ââŚworried about how sheâs beenâŚâ
Keith shrugs. "Itâs completely true.
This reply doesnât really fit the way some of the questions were phrased. Sean, Rosie, Reilly, and Lopez just ask about the scar without mentioning the zombie rumour.
He says tall as Keith and of Korean descent.
âHeâs asâ. Also, Iâd probably say that he âlooks to be of Korean descentâ rather than just saying that he is.
The older gentleman stands, turns, and liens against the buffet table.
âleansâ
dying out the flames.
Is this an dialect thing? Because Iâve never heard âdying out the flamesâ before, but Iâm pretty sure you used it last chapter, too.
Iâm reading you all to safety.
âleadingâ
*if team_leadership >= 12
I assume you want to call WithTeamOD before this check, as if you left Jaime and Rachel outside and havenât regrouped yet, they wouldnât be with your team right now, but would still be contributing +10 to the team_leadership value.
you and your team across the Thruway back to the main yard.
âcrossâ?
There really should be an option to free Benton so he can help with the fight.
*if civilians_chaos
Is this variable ever true? Should this be not(rallied_civilians) instead?
A number of teenagers where the Silverthornes uniform
âwearâ
Those civilians help their cause, they lack the gunpower to contribute
âThoughâ?
*if separate_group
*set separate_group false
This should reset the with_ variables to reflect the members of your party returning.
A single civilian with a flat shaft of metal kill the infected that have made their way inside so far.
âkillsâ
The blast hit his chest, sending him backwards into the one behind him.
âhitsâ
Zombies fall, and you keep up the pressure as long as your ammo will allow.
This is for melee attacks, not ranged, so there shouldnât be any ammo.
*if atop_trailer = 0
No one helps at the broken fence.
*if atop_trailer = 1
Only one of your team helps the civilian at the broken fence.
*if atop_trailer > 1
You look over at the members of your team helping the civilian at the broken fence.
These should be talking about the people on the trailer, not by the fence.
Several infected have made their way through the broken fence and now wonder about camp.
âwanderâ
Plant and explosive charge at the bottom of the tower.
âanâ
and your neck shot hits the base of his skull.
ânextâ
You turn to see the source of the shot but failed to locate anyone among the crowd.
âfailâ
Rachel kneels next to you, not lights the Molotov cocktail you handed her, stands, and throws it overhead.
Delete the ânotâ.
Daniel, the young Asian man, youâve seen Keith speaking with
Daniel was only named if you killed/captured all of Natalie, Wyatt, and Benton.
Mr. Sullivan whose well protected behind a blockade of soldiers.
âwhoâsâ
I guess itâs not a particularly major thing, but part of me would like to be able to talk to Tommy at the tavern. Admittedly, I donât see it being particularly useful; he probably wouldnât be able to tell you more than anyone else about the camp, and if you couldnât get him to join back in Part 1, he probably isnât going to change his mind now, but it does feel like a missed opportunity. 
Just a thing I noticed, is that if MC has Jillian as 2nd RO than unless you have Gina or Lopez as main RO you are not going to sleep with her in chapter 8 but in chapter 12 she is still pregnant.
I encountered this error after finishing group management after going back from Lancelot.
Edit: Darn, choosing both options displays the error. I canât go further.
Does anyone know if Rachel being sick is scripted?
I totally agree!
@GKRA
Thank you for the screenshots.
I had to make a limit. Itâs already a really hard scene to code with all those variables. Plus, the junkyard was just attacked or at least a group tried to attack. Your group wants to leave enough people behind to defend.
Not just yet. I am trying to think of the blessed place to handle it. Iâm considering the prom.
Also I really canât thank you enough for all the feedback and bug fixes.
Final notes!
minor stuff
*if using_gas_bomb
*set keith_poisoned false
How does a gas bomb cure cyanide poisoning? Also, since keith_poisoned was an integer, this is a type error. (The startup file gives 3 as the value for gas poisoning, but Iâd check to see if heâs already poisoned first.)
knock the infected backwards or in pale their heads.
âimpaleâ
farthest from the explosion by twenty feet,
This seems awkwardly worded.
As the dust settles, you see the bodies of
*if civilians_killed_explosion
civilians lying under broken wood and rubble.
Should this increase survivor_kills?
*if benton_alive
Benton rushes to the side of the tower and vomits over the railing.
This is true even if Bentonâs your prisoner; you use benton_st for when heâs still with the Silverthornes. (I noticed this several times in the tower attack section, including setting the value for benton_alive to false without any other checks.)
With your weapon ready, you scan the top of the tower and notice the Silverthorne leadership spread along the platform and inside the tower room. Keith changes position from leaning over the railing with his walkie-talkie and bullhorn to walking into the tower room. He often paces along the platform or moves to the staircase to @{benton_st talk to Benton.|yell down instructions.} You can also see heâs wearing a Kevlar vast since he left the FEMA tent.
This section is clearly written for before youâve attacked the tower, but can appear after you used a bomb or gas on it.
He topples forwards, hits the rallying, and falls over the top of it.
He stumbles into the rattling, falls over it, and plunges thirty feet to the ceiling of a tent.
ârailingâ
a series of shots from your group forcing him into cover.
âforcesâ
*if team_offense >= 40
This kill gives the rest of your group an opening to mount a counterattack.
Which kill? This occurs directly after your team had been retreating/discussing retreat, and the kills (if any) happened before that.
âYou damn hypocrite. You detonated an explosive near group of civilians. All I want to do is shoot the top of the tent, which wonât endanger one of them. Youâre out of line.â
This feels like it should have an impact on rachel_factionâŚ
You rush with the crowd, watching for soldiers and dodging those running next to you in the mayhem.
You can get here even if Rachel didnât fire on the civilians.
Rosie runs through the yard, drawing fire which strikes the ground right behind her feet. She fires burst from her submachine gun and slides into a tipped over dumpster.
I could be mistaken, but I believe that Rosie canât be alive at this point.
and you turned to see Jude laying flat on the top of a car parked near the Thruway.
âturnâ and âlyingâ.
Rachel bursts across the Thruway with their girl on her back.
âtheâ
Donât worry, all clean it up in there.
âIâllâ
"His ropes were to lose, so I tightened them.
âtooâ
*if stayed_with_benton = "Parker"
*set with_parker true
*set with_sean true
Sean shouldnât be there.
When a teenage girl steps behind him, he switches places with her so she moved one step forwards.
âmovesâ
You slide the tent flap, and the group holds out there weapons defensively.
âtheirâ
If the gates fall in the Silverthornes fail their defense,
This is poorly worded.
"It looks like it just slice through the outside of your ribs.
âslicedâ
You weave In-N-Out tense and food carts,
I assume this should be âYou weave in and out of tents and food carts,â
*selectable_if (steal_civilians = false)
Presumably these should be *selectable_if (steal_civilians)?
He was reluctant to rob from the civilians but found a tube of medical appointment
âointmentâ?
including herbs for cooking
Are these supposed to be added to the inventory, or is this just flavour text?
Jude shows off a new Gilly suit he found
âGhillieâ
You still havenât seen Kelly in all the time youâve spent at this camp.
Yes you have. Right here:
Kelly walks just at his back, and she glances over at your group with a look of reserved excitement.
*if attacked_tower
@{studied_silverthornes Even at|When you attacked} the tower you saw no signs of her among the Silverthorne leadership.
*if studied_silverthornes or attacked_tower
You thought Keith was keeping her by his side, but she must be in another part of the FEMA camp.
I am pretty certain that there is no way to search for Kelly after attacking the Silverthornes.
*goto KellyCheck
I think a few of these (specifically for Bailey and Gina) should go to KellyGroup instead of KellyCheck.
âKelly as part of our group, and sheâs coming with us,â
âisâ
Dante draws two pistols and pointed one at each soldier.
âpointsâ
$lopez} raises his carbine with a smile.
â${lopez}â
I note that elsewhere, Silverthorne kills are counted as bandit_kills but Mendoza is counted as one of the survivor_kills.
Rachel walks up to her, holds out her pistol, and fireâs once into the soldierâs forehead
âfiresâ Also needs to end with a full stop/period.
They have given me responsibilities, and people rely on me now. I never had that with you.
Couldnât Kelly have been quartermaster?
*if second_in_command != ""
you and ${second_in_command}.
The second-in-command might not be there.
Keith says as he stops in front of you, sons looped inside his belt.
Not sure what this should be, but I donât think itâs âsonsâ.
They
*if helping_defense
aided our defense at their own risk.
*if rallied_civilians
*if helping_defense
also
rallied our civilians to safety.
I think both of these have to be true to reach this point. (That said, you can have poisoned Keith, but thereâs no text to indicate that.)
It is a mutual protection pact. At times we will call on you to aid our camp or help to fight our enemies.
I note that he never mentions helping to protect us, which kinda defeats the purpose of a mutual protection pact. Presumably it should mention that the protection does go both ways.
Kelly scoffs. âSounds like youâre making a lot of excuses for what these psychos did.â
Would a Kelly whoâs been with the Silverthornes have the same level of vitriol? She seemed to have warmed on them enough to potentially want to stay.
are best keeps them fed three times a day and safe at night.
âourâ
the New Army is not made a dent in the zombie population.
âhas not madeâ or âis not makingâ.
âOne of ours was killed too. Or are you forgetting that?â
Iâm pretty certain we could have killed more than one of them.
we will do our best to give you aid in always possible.
âall waysâ
#Nothing. Iâm sure Jaime or Rachel will speak up on the groupâs behalf.
No text in this option.
If you choose to give Kelly back to the Silverthornes, after just rescuing her, and are dating her, you get both sets of dialogue, and they need a line break between them (and maybe a slight change to the wording).
âWeâre going to take care of you, Kelly. We are not the bogeyman you people make us out to be.â
Should also probably be worded differently if Kelly was just rescued.
#"I forgot about your relationship with Lopez. I'll choose someone else."
*set jaime_faction %+(round(empathy/6))
*set lopez_faction %+(round(empathy/6))
I donât think it makes sense to gain rel points for not doing something badâŚ
I think she will fit in with these Silverthornes.."
Delete the second full stop/period.
we already have too many people living at the Junkyard.
I mean, sure, the maximum number of people we can have at this point is 25 (I think), but the minimum is 9 (MC, Jaime, Rachel, Brody, Madison, Reilly, Kevin, Billie, and either Sean or Fred). I donât think the latter would count as âtoo manyââŚ
Now thereâs a little girl involved. That changes everything."
but it would be good to have a kid with us so we keep all of this in perspective.
Would this be different if youâve got the nephew?
"I see no. Too risky.
âsayâ
And name may be excited for a friend.
â${dep_name}â
More major stuff:
Okay, maybe this first one isnât that major, but it felt weird that if Jude (a character youâve only barely let onto the team) dies, you get several sentences of pathos as the MC considers his life and death, but Rosie (a character from Part 1, who could even be the MCâs girlfriend) and Dante get no reaction from the MC or prose whatsoever, and Gina only gets a single sentence of reaction.
More importantly, Benton kinda just vanishes in the chaos. This might be intentional, but even if it is, you should note that he has gone, and if itâs not, you should mention how the team is still keeping him hostage as they leave the camp. (And presumably have a condition of allying with the Silverthornes be to free him.) And if you left him with a member of your team, you can end up leaving both behind if you donât go to the right car. Again, this could be intentional, but if it is, the story needs to be clear (and I really canât see Jaime being okay with leaving someone behind just because itâs more convenient to do so).
Finally, I think a few of the choices about who has to stay with the Silverthornes ignore the characters relationships. The only relationship that was really mentioned was the Lopez/Jaime one, but surely Lopez would act the same way if he was dating Tommy. Likewise, while Bailey mentions her potential relationship with Brody, it doesnât actually influence her decision to volunteer, if she does. And for friendships, I can certainly see Kelly being less likely to volunteer so she can stay with Parker (especially if she hasnât seen him for weeks now). (Similarly, I can see her being more likely to rejoin the group if Parker was present.) On the other hand, I can see that Parker might actually be willing to volunteer (or at least be less sad about being volunteered) if Kelly is still with the Silverthornes (and might also have some words for the MC if they didnât bother looking for her).
And⌠combining the last two points, I would love to be able to offer Benton as a âmember of our groupâ to join the SilverthornesâŚ
Thanks. 
And⌠does that mean the Brody/Bailey stuff will also be put off until the prom? (I guess thereâs not that much about it in Chapter 8.) 
I think you shouldnât lose morality if you want to raise your baby together with Jillian.
One more thing, the game has no variable if you say to Gina that you are ok with an open relationship or if you convince her to be in a thruple with Jillian. Maybe it would be better to differentiate those 2 types of relationship?
Will Kevin be a RO?
Man, I am very curious to see the reaction of teenage MCâs parents when they find out about their child becoming a dad while theyâre trying not to be get eaten by zombies, though our dad seems to have quite a few secrets of his ownâŚ
Didnât think you could romance Jillian as a teen.