Sometimes I’m infected by the ceiling mass and sometimes I’m not (the ooze does not enter my bloodstream). Is this random?
When I encounter the gloved hand, walking past it reduces my humanity but attacking it does not - doesn’t seem right.
The goggles have battery life in the fuel run, but not in the previous chapter (or the recon mission in part 4 beta). I can understand the gameplay benefits of this decision, but just thought I’d mention it.
I also have a giant list of grammar-related issues (not surprising given the amount of content), and given its size, I’m not sure if I should post it. What do y’all think?
(Again, I’d like to say that the writing is very good and imaginative. It is also far easier to point at minor mistakes in another’s work than to create something myself - I know I couldn’t make a game like this. Also, if anyone finds my constant posts annoying, just say the word.)
Do you think I should post all of my other corrections?
To clarify my use of the word “giant” in my previous post, my list of corrections (not counting the ones above) is approaching 80 items. That could be a sign of snobbishness and/or stylistic differences and/or ridiculous perfectionism and/or mistakes on my part.
@GhylTarvoke Just a thought, it might be better to PM (or even email) the list @JimD. That way he can work through each item at his leisure (it will take time to track them all down) without having to go back over the forum topic–and this is a busy thread. I have absolutely no doubt he would welcome any feedback helping to improve the game.
@JimD I have some VERY minor nitpicking: When you first encounter Mindy and Candace as they’re being chased by a zombie in the lobby, Mindy is described as having a pixie haircut, but pixie cuts are very short, while the hairstyle she has in the picture on the same page is closer to a bob.
i found an error in part 4 after the fight between carl and jason when you visit carl and help carl for infoformation then leave him there after you talk to the last person its says error no choices
@revanrulesrussia going to Temperance with Mindy is either to get medicine or scavenge. Depending on the status of Eugene and Devlin, you may also interact with them.
@GhylTarvoke thanks for all the helpful suggestions!
@Eriedanna the artist who drew the picture took some license, but overall I like the image.
Uh, I’m new to this site. In fact, this is my first post here. Please be gentle.
This is my favorite game on the site, hands-down. The others aren’t as well-written or investing as this is (and it’s the only one I’ve seen that has pictures). Not to say the others are bad, of course.
My favorite part so far was the fuel run. That could seriously be in a AAA survival horror game. Big kudos there.
Also, why were people posting their characters in this thread earlier? Would you mind if I did that? I think I made a good one.
@ArchAngel950 Yeah welcome. Cool name. The reason people were submitting characters was because JimD wanted some racially diverse ones, considering the cathedral is basically white dominant at this point. I don’t know if he’s still accepting but your welcome to ask.
@ArchAngel950 welcome to our group. Please send your character idea to me through ta private message. I can’t guarantee I’ll use her as I am close to the end of new character development, but I will see what I can do.
