Before I begin:
I know that a little while ago I made a poll about what game I should make (http://www.choiceofgames.com/forum/discussion/796/which-of-these-games-should-i-make/) , then ignored the community preference (Servitude, followed by Summit 75) and announced I would work on one of the least favorites (Exotico Extravaganza).
Well I came up with too many characters and too few plot points, so I decided to start another of the least favorites (You and You)!
A link can be found below, but be warned: this is very early in the game. The reason I am posting it so early is so I can get some feedback on the following points:
- How does the writing feel to you? Specifically, is it too sparse and plain or wordy?
- Are there too many or too few choices? I realize it is a short demo, but if you have an opinion let me know.
- How does the concept of having a doppelganger make you feel? Creeped out? Excited? Anrgy? Confused?
- Should I include an intro?
Anyway, here is the link: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/121988927/YouandYou/web/mygame/index.html