Hooray! An update!
I found a typo on this part
Isamu was fast and agile, he was running towards the outskirt of town. There was already a list of Yokai forming in my head; Kitsune, Amemasu, or even a Jogorumo
. All three had known behaviors of seducing young men.
"You have earned your rightful place as an Onmyoji. Dismiss.
"A wagon is ready at your disposal, we await your results. Dismiss."
It should be Dismissed on both cases..
You're the first visitor I had for a while. What is a human doing here?" Hiss smirk was dangerously alluring.
Just His on this part
Also, I seemed to find a problem regarding motives
I smiled, regardless of how everything went, my mission was a succeed. I was one step closer to realizing my motives.
Considering Isamu had just revealed that the mother is dead, maybe the MC need to decide another motive at this point?
Also, the MC seem to be moving on from their mother's death a bit too quickly for my liking, being mostly happy and smiling uncontrollably after becoming an omnyouji, when my MC's main motivation is to find their mother, who is now dead
I also found an error after choosing "Let Haruki use his powers, I trust him."
Many things are happening! So excited
EDIT: Missing part here?
"I, Rkuemon no Kyouran will repay my debt to you, MC." He
9 white tails spurted themselves on the back of Kyouran, all at once. Red markings started to surface on the kitsune's face.