Very good story! I really enjoy all of the characters, especially Martin.
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I really enjoyed this demo. The writing is excellent and you have a great plot. Definitely looking forward to seeing more.
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I freaking love this. Reading it was so much fun 
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Oh my gosh thank you for all the kind words they give me life 
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