WIP: The Song of Exile (Update 05/05/2021)

Fixed the bug!

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The pronouns are not correct in a few pages. Just wanted to let you know.

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Also, there are some times when the MC is referred to as a man (even though I’m playing as a woman)

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I really enjoyed the demo so far ~ I think it’s written really well…

There are instances of pronouns mixing up tho :slight_smile: I play as a female MC.
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other than that, I’ve not seen nor encounter othe rproblems

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Fixed the gender stuff.

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After the feast, before we talk to Arthur, the scene between MC and the landowner sometimes mixes up the pronouns of the landowner. Other than that, everything else was great! I especially loved the narration, because the way things are revealed added to the medieval feeling.

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This is written so beautifully!! I’m so excited to see how it turns out :heart_eyes:

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Fixed the pronouns.

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Chapter 6 added!

@moderators - could you, please, change the update bit in the title of the thread to (Update 05/05/2021)?

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Done!

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Found this error . appears for every choice in the page.

fixed that


:slight_smile: another error

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Another one.

Very nice update. I enjoy the unraveling of it all and I am really looking forward to learning about the past.
Are you intending on keeping the pacing? Right now it is quite fast which gives the story the feeling of kind of a powerlessness of the mc and I like it so far but I am not sure it will work for the whole book. Unless you want to keep the mc as powerless as now. :slight_smile: looking forward to more from this

Fixed the error

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naughty bug

fixed.

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While I agree that it sometimes feel rushed, man I’m hooked. Thanks for an update

Good story so far, can we have a list of ROs?

Is Edwina the only available RO in the current demo?