Thanks so much! That is the goal 
just doing one more round of minor edits on ch 1 then I can start drafting out ch 2!
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I played the demo, it definitely looks very promising 
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Update time!
Thanks so much for your feedback and support everyone. Your kind words go a long way to keeping me motivated to do my best with this project.
I just uploaded a more or less finalized Chapter 1, incorporating most the feedback you’ve all provided. There are still a few things I may add down the road, but I think it’s time for me to focus on moving forward with Chapter 2 for the time being.
My hope is to have a super rough draft of Ch 2 up before my baby’s due (early September), but frankly I don’t know how likely that is. Though I work on this most days, it takes way longer than expected to write a chapter, but you never know! I’m getting faster all the time.
If that doesn’t work out, it’ll be a long while yet before you see any new content. I’m not planning on writing a whole lot with a newborn, I can tell you that much.
In the meantime, feel free to keep leaving feedback on Ch 1. I may not incorporate it for a while, but I keep notes on what I hope to update in the future.
Thanks again everyone 
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