Hmm, I don’t seem to see any error. Can you tell me which part it is?
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It isn’t an error, but rather the way its worded.
The begging where it says obey. It can be taken very poorly to readers. It would be better to do something like I accept this quest or something of that nature.
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I know it has a synopsis but can someone tell me more about the game please
Ooh- fascinating! I’ll be sure to pair her up with one of my ocs :>
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honestly speaking, id prefer if you kept it gender locked and the original story planned intact. not a great decision business wise, and if you make it you can make it work, you probably should. but trying to cater to everyone usually leads to the narrative getting diluted and generic. capturing a niche and doing it well, like the infinity series did, well that’d be swell.
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Yo bro why is this game so underated
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Update will be next, next week.
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Emergency Delay Alert!
Alright… I jinxed it. Remember when I said the update was on time? Yeah, about that…
The 0.4 update will be fashionably late, like 2 to 3 days late. Why? Because real life decided to do a surprise boss raid on my schedule🔥 (especially school works. I am really cooked)
But fear not! The final boss (a.k.a. the ending) is all that’s left. Once that’s defeated, the update will be ready to drop like a loot chest.
Thanks for sticking around! You’re all legends. 
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I want to ask do you have any plans in the future to create portraits of RO and their descriptions? Also, will there be a description and full customization for the MC? And aside from sword skills and knowledge, will there be other types of skills?
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I’m aiming to reach a thousand words this coming month, along with refining what I’ve already written and reworking a few sections to improve overall flow and quality.
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Welcome back author!!
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PROGRESS UPDATE:
Current total word count is around 230,000 words.
This includes both the newly rewritten parts and the sections I’ve decided not to touch anymore.
So far, the changes cover the:
•updated prologue, especially the dream sequence.
•adjustments to the initial stat system,
•and a massive overhaul of Chapter 1.
With more revisions are still ongoing. I will update the game at the end of the month.
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If you stay, they will wiped us out and with us, the bloodline of Aetherion will
Found a typo.
Adrienne, your childhood friend who were roaming around the corridor. She wears a finely tailored doublet of deep emerald green, embroidered with golden threads that shimmer faintly in the light, he exudes a regal air. A delicate white linen shirt peeks out from beneath, its ruffled collar adding a youthful charm to his ensemble. HIs breeches a, a shade darker than his doublet, are perfectly fitted, and soft leather boots with polished buckles complete his looks. Despite the elegance of his attire, there’s a boyish ease in the way he carries himself.
Big typo here. And are you gonna add skintones later?
Yes, it’s already included in the newly rewritten prologue.
However, in the current version posted above, skin tone is still locked. In the next update, you’ll be able to choose your skin color. I’ll also be fixing a lot of typos along the way!
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Just finished the final touch of the game. The rewritten version of the game will be released tomorrow. The exact time is still undecided though.
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Guess what, folks.
The update will be postponed by another day. The reason is time.
I was wrong about releasing it by the end of April. I underestimated how long the Great Rewrite would take.
At this point, I expect the update to arrive around May 4 or May 5 if things go smoothly. If not, then May 8 at the latest.
I’m sorry for the incorrect announcement earlier.
What I can promise is that the rewritten version will be significantly better than the current one.
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The game is now updated.
The reason for the change is my schedule. It’s going to get tighter in the upcoming days, so I won’t be able to push updates in large chunks ike before. Instead, the update will come in parts.
The first part is out now. The second half will come later, and I dont have a very confirmed date yet.
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Any feedback to the game, positive, negative, is greatly appreciated.
The game is still in alpha before the Great Rewrite, and even after it, it remains in alpha. New contents has been added as usual, but the changelog has not been updated yet, so don’t rely on it now.
I am also request a feedback if you have on how the game actually feels right now compared before.
Also, a quick note.
The 230,000 word count I mentioned earlier includes both new and old content. After removing older sections that no longer serve the game, the actual usable content comes down to around 199,000 words.
I know that might sound confusing, and I’m not trying to misled anyone. It surprised me too when I saw the difference. I honestly just didn’t expect it to drop that much after cleaning things up.
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