When the MC goes
“Oi Nerinas! What’s that on your collar? Oh. My bad. Its just the soup you tried to drink earlier.”
It was just really lame when the other taunt was as awesome and cool as
“Look at this man-child trying to fit in with his big talk! Of course I’m not the best, I was just scrubbing shit off the floor yesterday! Which is pretty much the same as what I’m about to do.”
or
“Is that how you treat women? No wonder the only thing you can beat is your own…” I’m not sure what that last part is since I took that one from the comment scene list but I’m guessing penis
Maybe a quip about Nerina’s age or her fugly mouth?
If the main character’s best friend is even reasonably observant I think she’d at least have to suspect my mc is gay.
Again I think in my mc’s case in particular Dionysia should be able to tell fairly easily with how my mc would stare at Kraterous, particularly naked Kraterous.
I tried again. It finally worked. cries tears of joy I do not understand why I encounter those problems. If that was problem with the game itself or simply my mobile. Anyway, it works. Still, thank you for your time and attention.
@MossHeart
I totally agree with you haha. I was doing a writing sprint and couldn’t think of a better taunt. But yes! I’ll figure it out haha thanks for letting me know!!
@idonotlikeusernames
hahaha that is also true. I’ve added a bit of that flavour into the chapter! Didn’t want to go too deep but I hope it does do some justice!
@Bugreporter
Maybe it’s one of those british / US things hahaha. But thank you! All feedback is good feedback
@LikeGames
Haha I did change the base code so most of the errors were definitely my fault! Haha no worries on your end.
Thank YOU for playing through my demo and giving me such helpful comments!!!
@Kristina_NRE
Hahaha well done. Here’s a for you haha. 666 is actually a lucky number in China!
Just not from me, though.
for you haha. 666 is actually a lucky number in China!
