@nauhziy "You were born in the lands of..."
Would be better if it ended there, then you have to press a "Next" button to know. Also, remember what we said about choosing random character or making our own? I think the option to choose should go either before or after choosing perma-death or not. Why? Because me for example, I want to play a character created by me, but with the risks of certain death if I mess things up.
You dont really care as much for a random character as you would care for a character you make yourself, in my opinion.
Also, Gallic. I am trained and worked out, so I get strength. But my father trains me in leading a warband and I doesnt raise leadership? It should raise, even if just half of what strenght raised, I guess.
And would be a nice and easy to do touch, to let us choose the tattoo we get, kinda like what it looks like. No real need for it to buff us, or to have to think different buffs, just some designs to choose from xD
"But in reality, she was a strong, head-strong girl" here, I think it would sound better like "But in reality, she was a strong, stubborn girl". Might be me, but strong, headstrong sounds bad to me, makes me stop for a bit and think "wait what?" while I re read to check i didnt just read strong two times xD
"Your favorite past time was to..."
Here you get to choose between feats of strength, smarts history learning, or flirting either with boys or girls. I think you should separate the first ones from the last two. Why? It feels to me like Im choosing between upgrading a stat, or choosing the sex my character likes
And yeah, Boadicea was it? I get my gang to go and bash some lowlife skulls plotting to rob us, and find my childhood friend made a man somehow, must be dark magic xD
"Boadicea and you, together with 2 of your friends pause, humiliated but the public insult." From the public insult? For the public insult? Im not too good at english, so I cant suggest the good one, but "but" doesnt sounds right xD
Also, Teutorigos throws a danger at Boadicea, that made me laugh hard. At first I read dagger, then I went back and couldnt stop xD
After that, you get this:
"Victory is ours!" exclaims Boadicea.
-Not yet, chase the lowlifes and end them once and for all.
-We are victorious! Loot the dead lowlifes and notify the undertaker.
-Let's get out of here, they might come back with more of their gang!
One of my friends died there, and we made them run. Instead of get out of here, they might come with more, maybe lets go we have to honor the dead? I dont know xD
Who was this Teutorigos? What a scumbag. You will make sure the authorities deal with such a impudent whim like him!
-Kill him anyway
-Let him go
I would like the option to further interrogate to learn Teutorigos whereabouts.
I would do something like:
-Ask for Teutorigos whereabouts, then give him some gold.
-Torture him to learn Teutorigos whereabout, then kill him.
-Release him. Then this one would split in: would you like to give him some gold? Yes and no.
After all, Im a noble, Im better than those lowlifes that steal what they dont own and I will prove them that Im over them, in both body and mind.
And after I use my influence to find Teutorigos, it is my father looking for him with his influences, then selling him. I would like some fists flying, but still, I will have to wait, Im not done with him yet. I hope you let us take revenge, as an attack with blood asks for a retibution in blood xD
I will continue later, I cant read and review as fast as I thought xD