[WIP] Such Happy Campers (DEMO UPDATED April 4th, 3 chapters, 64.385 words)

Post a screenshot of what you do see?

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In the meantime, I tried another temporary work around. Tell me if this worked, and if so, this will allow you to get what you need done, until we have answers.

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Whatever you did, it worked!! I can see the Edit option!

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Thanks for adding in the list :heart_hands:

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Wow this was an amazing read. I really love your writing style and I love all of the characters already (especially Flo!). I can’t wait for it to propably go all horribly wrong :joy:

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I know that it’ll go to hell in the later chapters but I had a lot of fun interacting with our group, the chill vibes made me almost forget that I’m playing a horror-game than a slice-of-life. Hope to see more fun stuffs on the next update.

Also, Flo is best bud.

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Thanks!! I’m really happy you enjoyed it. Flo seems to have the most admirers so far xD glad to add another to the list. And yes, it will all go very wrong soon <3

This. I love this. Thank you for making this picture, I will treasure it always <3
I’m hoping to get the next update to you all in two to three weeks or so

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Damn this is awesome :heart: Love how smoothly the friendships work and the occasional flirty banter, even the currently not so successful flirting (looking at you Flo :eyes:).
And the siblings’ relationship is written well too. All of which is not surprising considering how authentic the RO’s come across as. I also love how you’ve added the option for MC to personally know sensory overload.

Definitely looking forward to more updates :slight_smile:

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The storyline is quite intriguing! I love it! :heart:
I really like your sentence formation; because of this, it was an immersive experience for me.
I’d really like if there’s a header for prologue and other chapters.
Apart from that, the demo so far is fantastic!
Waiting for more updates! :smile:

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I’m very happy to hear that you like my little project (aka the creation-in-progress I think about every day and every night)! And Flo will come around. Give him some time… he’ll catch on.
Yeah the inclusion of sensitive overload was important to me for personal reasons, though I doubt it’ll come up often in the course of the story (outside of Flo conversations). Thanks for the kind words!!

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Thank you very much!! The headers are… a reasonable request. You’re not the first to ask for them. I promise I’m on it, but I’m still trying to find a way to make them look good :,)
Thanks for the encouragement!!

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Re: headers;
In this most recent update, I’ve titled all the chapters. I do want to include more artful headers, so this is more of a temporary solution… just wanted to let you know I haven’t forgotten!

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I really like the idea and the direction this project is heading, although; What’s your goal for total words as well as chapters?
P.S I would (In my opinion) add like brackets for like (ROS, PLOT, Author Updates, etc) on this listing, just makes it more organized in my opinion.

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Summer camp is one of my favorite settings for horror, so I’m very excited about the direction for this! I like the slice-of-life feel in the beginning, I think it creates a nice contrast when things start getting weird. The group rapport feels natural and authentic. If it’s not too spoiler-y for you to answer, can survival of the MC and ROs (whatever that would mean within the context of this story) be affected by our relationships?

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Once again; I absolutely love your style and the way you describe characters. Our little campers are the cutest, I love how we can choose our interactions with them. Natural flow of the story and chemistry beetwen ROs is great as well. One of my fav WIP, I’ll be waiting for more <3

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Definitely one of my watch :face_with_monocle: list.

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Total word count and chapters: as many as it takes. As stated in the post itself, I think it’s about 25% done as of right now, but that might change.

I don’t know about brackets but I moved the text around a bit so the content-related text is on top. I think that made it more organized… Is this better?

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Heyo! Happy that you’re enjoying it!! I’m afraid I can’t answer that question tho, it really would be very spoilery… I’m sorry

OH YAY thank you so much!! I’m so glad to hear you’re enjoying the campers! There’s LOTS of interactions with them in the future chapters also, so there’s more where that came from.