(WIP) Scales of Justice - CHAPTER 4 UPDATE! (28/04/2022)

the reason why ‘healing’ magic is rare is that it’s dangerous and highly regulated. No one wants a student going down the deep end to their name.

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Hi!! Sorry, could you specify to me the details of the unselectable option? I mean, whether you accepted/rejected Silver Demon’s deal, and what option appears unavailable to you. I also understand that you are a sword user, not a bow user, right? Because for combat MC’s, you must specialise on a certain weapon, at least in this first book!!

Yes it is!! V presents themselves as V Darieri, and thus they are sometimes referred to by their surname instead of their name. They are also the only character with a surname in the game, and they’re very proud of it!!

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Hi! I am a sword user, I did not accept the silver demon’s deal and the options unavailable were the sword and bow options but! (basically, it seemed to be the physical options were blocked off maybe by accident?) I’ll take some screenshots and add them to this post(?) or a later post if you prefer

I also don’t quite remember if choosing a primary weapon(?) maybe it was at the very beginning? In the stats, it said I used a sword.

Ah! I see, (I personally) thought it was a little confusing, maybe V could also say that they are called Darieri at times when they introduce themselves? (a suggestion only :slight_smile: )

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Okaaay it took me a bit to figure out why it wasn’t working, but I think that’s fixed now!!

Your choice of weapon happens in your first fight during chapter 2. I think there should be a warning, however, I will double check and add it in case there isn’t!!

Oh, V will be delighted to repeat their name more than once XDDD

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This looks really cool! Can’t wait for another update!

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Thank you!!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Idk if anyone mention it yet but there is a lot of wrong pronouns for female ro

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Hi!! Yes, thank you for mentioning that! I went through the chapters again today and tried to change all the uncoded pronous that I could find, so there should be less now. However, if you find any more please do let me know, as I obviously may accidentally miss them!! My fear to make the ros too girly if I write in feminine brings me to this kind of errors, as my current tester also plays the game with male pronouns. :sweat_smile: :sweat_smile: That’s why I’m always grateful for people to notice that something so hard to find is wrong :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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I found a typo. It should be “entertained” and this error.

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Hi, thank you so much!! As much as I revise there’s always things wrong, so this is so helpful for me while I’m not doing the final big edit of the book!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Also, thanks for the error, I think I got a bit confused between files and coded a chapter in before writing it XD

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