(WIP) Project Vampire [Science Fiction | Supernatural | Thriller] Updated 10/30/25

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Before you read everything below, just know this is another rewrite. I want this to be mostly dark and even some horror. To make specimen 48 a terror. Theres gonna be some mature content.

This is good for me since this prepares me for the kind of dark I want my other WIP to gradually be. There won’t be a normal romance but itll still be there.

Synopsis

In an age of transhumanism, you are on the other side, bio-engineering. The creation of a perfect human; a vampire who evolves through blood, let loose onto humanity that lost its soul since they became a type 1 civilization.

Specimen 48

You are specimen 48. Born into a world who treated you like nothing, given to those who thought your life was worth even less. You survived because the others before you didn’t. Those that were next to you for who knows how long remain in slumber. Owned by the government. By WRAITH.

You escaped because someone let you. You live because you are better. You will be supreme because you are perfect. Take back the world that spat you out, drink it down to the last cell. It is what you were made for. Too bad it’s against them.

Transhumanism

Cyborgs, androids, robots, cybernetics, AI, nothing is left on the table. If you die and you’re important, you’re repurposed. Your body is an advertisement and your brain a way to make passive money. Making enough to live, just not comfortably.

Spider

Your mother, caretaker, teacher and eventual victim. You can’t be superior if you can’t surpass the one who taught you to navigate the current world. Problem is she is a crime lord, a powerful one. Not just materially, physically too. Her chromed body holds secrets you can’t predict. She should change her title to silver widow.

Time to wake up…Specimen 48

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Interesting. Is it inspired by the game or the tabletop? The stat sheet looks more inspired by World of Darkness.

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The game

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I really like it, especially because of our slightly snarky twin :laughing: it has a lot of blood (it’s a vampire game, I know, they need blood :laughing:) and zombies (I hate them :triumph:) and hopefully we have RO’s too? Need TLC, too, even as vampire :yum: I’m looking forward to more :heart:

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Very noice, short but with great potential, no errors and I don’t think I’ve seen typos, expectant for more :smile:

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So mercy hospital like in left 4 dead game? :sweat_smile:

I love that game especially the sequel left 4 dead 2

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Honestly… this was a hard read… and came across much more like you wanted to write an AO3 Fanfic than a CoG Game.

The theme is great, I love The Masquerade and Cyberpunk and this did feel like a mix of the two, but starting with next to no actual choices (I think there’s four or five, including your gender and whether or not you’re strong, fast etc) You have no real control over anything, your personality is heavily set, as is all the actions you take and dialogue…

The worst part for me was the immediate way “sex” is forced in…? And how it seems more like a fetish than anything to do with the story. Your ‘Clone’ for some reason, has to be the opposite gender (So no choice on sexuality) Is immediately described by her “Ass” rather than… well, anything else, and then we get the dialogue of how we’ve had sex with them, multiple times… But also consider them more like a Twin/Sibling…??

It just seems more like a Cyberpunk inspired Fanfic with a heavy dose of “Author’s barely disguised fetish”

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@Queen_Zelda The MC is mentally unstable so an RO would either push them further into vampirism or bring out their humanity.

@Knoez I played it a long time ago but I wasn’t thinking of that game when I created the job.

@Aratuza The prologue and ch1 is tutorial. your control is determined whether or not you’re fed. Your personality is based on action, that’s how I like to write it rather than dialogue. Increasing personality stats on what you say, I don’t like that. You can choose what to say but it won’t increase anything. Will change outcomes of jobs but no permanent stat increase.

It can paint a picture on how stable your MC is. Now sex? This was when the MC was a child vampire and evolved enough to create the splicer. As a child, you are attracted to the opposite gender biologically, so the splicer reflected that. Mix in trauma and you have what you have.

Being gay or straight doesn’t matter to the MC because they’re all the same, a source of blood.

Now for everyone. The main plot is the cyber dragon. Defeating it ends this story. Each evolution continues the plot.

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Anything with vampires catches my attention. The cyberpunk atmosphere was an interesting blend I haven’t seen much before in IFs, so I gave this a try.

I don’t mind a pre-set MC with a defined personality at all. It’s not for everyone, but I find them more enjoyable. Especially in settings that are notably different from the real world, as I’m more immersed into what the world is like from the perspective of someone who that is their every day reality.

Edit: I do think I’d genuinely enjoy more choices with how to treat the Splicer and given more freedom to interact with them on our terms, to evolve that relationship further to whatever the player wants it to be.

One thing I would say, I would’ve liked clearer prompting on the gender choice of the MC. It was not intuitive that I’d be picking my gender versus my clone’s gender, so I had to restart the game when I made my MC a male. I would say that this is a pattern that I encountered with the rest of the choices in the game. It wasn’t intuitive what choice I was making so I had to kind of guess what my options meant, especially when you fight the Widowmakers.

A small typo here where I’m a female MC and my clone is male but it refers to him as ‘her’ in this paragraph:

But once the honeymoon phase was over, I thought of him as an extension of myself. Because he is. Be grateful for that because I could’ve made him a slave. He would’ve done the same too. No one knows him since I can’t let her out indefinitely. Not yet. I’m getting there, year by year.

Another typo here with the splicer’s pronouns. Male splicer, but referred to as “they”:

My splicer’s upper body materializes beside me, their voice low and calm. “The blood wore off,” he replies, his shadowy form flickering faintly. “There’s eight of them, by the way.”

Behind me, my splicer stands silently, their shadowy form flickering in the dim light. They glance at the elevator. “A lot of bloodstains, no body or smears,” they comment, their voice calm, analytical. Then, without waiting for a reply, they disappear into shadow.

I’m honestly surprised the MC resorted to mutating the Widowmakers over picking up the scraps over the gang members who are probably easier targets. I did appreciate that the MC was not heavily invested into cybernetic enhancements, but that’s a personal preference for cyberpunk genre/role play, I like having minimal cybernetics.

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:thinking:

Power makes you arrogant and hungry.

Bioengineered FMRs is superior to cybernetics in this world. They continuously evolve while cybernetics just replace parts.

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“It can paint a picture on how stable your MC is. Now sex? This was when the MC was a child vampire and evolved enough to create the splicer. As a child, you are attracted to the opposite gender biologically, so the splicer reflected that. Mix in trauma and you have what you have.”

Wait… what? Your comment about kids being ‘biologically’ attracted to the opposite gender is plainly weird and untrue but to then add on that the whole unnecessary and un-skippable sex dialogue between our Clone/Twin is referring to when they were both children?

Yeah, I’m sorry but this is coming across as a fetish fan-fic disguised as a CoG Game.

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Don’t know what else to tell you. That’s the lore.

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What the hell man, we fucked the splicer? I didn’t even noticed that part :sob:

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Deciding to exit. Erased previous as didn’t get past next page after man/woman select.

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Don’t know what else to tell you. That’s the lore.

You realise you’re the writer, right?

I just don’t think a lot of people are going to like the idea that not only is it forced M/F for ‘reasons’ but you’re also forced to sexualise your ‘sibling’ like clone, and then forced to know that you and they had sex as kids…? Maybe just adding a choice where we, y’know… don’t do that.

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Im not changing the gender lore. 2 Straight and 1 lesbian ROs only. Not having another reincarnation: archdemon situation.

The sex stuff, thats fluff to describe how unstable they are. Mods wanted me to clarify. A child vampire is a young adult human.

You changed as a child, a second birth to a vampire yet grew the same rate as a human. Your splicer was created several years after.

Thats how i thought when i wrote it. Doesn’t matter now since im going to change it.

I can replace it with something else. Next update.

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I would be interested in the lesbian route, but, having clone as a man. It technically means bisexual or pan in MC case. Which I only do w/w routes myself. No interest in men. Never had.

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What @AChubbyBlackCat advised, im gonna evolve the splicer so trust me when I say, almost everything youve read in game is not the full picture.

Trying not to spoil but i end up doing so anyway.

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Even if you don’t think that old game still it kinda remind me of that when I read this and also the zombie part.

Well I love the game so far and doesn’t have any complaint for it so can’t wait to see what you have in store. Good luck :grinning:

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Update 1.1 minor improvements and backstory change.

The splicer will be evolved through special jobs, changing them to be a real person rather than just your shadow. This includes their gender. Max them out and they become either your unnatural twin brother or sister. Don’t and they remain your shadow. go halfway and only their gender could change.

ROs will be developed the same way, through jobs. You won’t get paid for it but it’ll function like one. Once coven is unlocked, you can turn them into another vampire.

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