Re-read the whole demo just for that additional Kel dialogue by the fire. Needless to say, I am satisfied
I’m surprised at how high one’s relationship can get with another character within three chapters, given that they’re not even halfway through their journey.
I think it’s understandable with Rem and Aja since you went to The University together, but I’m assuming that this is the first time MC has met Kel.
Not that I have any objections to raising rapport with Kel; just an observation. Of course, feel free to correct me if I’m wrong in my assumptions.
Aside from that, my opinion of this WIP still stands: good writing that pulls you in and envelopes you in the story, interesting cast that actually makes me more intrigued with the game, and above all, Kel best boy.