(WIP) Legend of the Dragoon - Rewrite in progress

This is my second official WIP.

(Rewrite) SYNOPSIS:
You are an orphan girl with the only thing you have from your father is his dragoon’s spear.

Youve kept it close like a friend, no one would take it from you.

One day with your orphan friends you all come across a treasure trove in a vampire’s den. Yet one object stuck out over the rest.

An artifact. A golden sphere. It was only when you touch it did it become liquid black.

It gave you flashes of places and thing you dont understand. Most importantly, a voice lingered in your head.

It deemed you the chosen one. Its twists and warps your reality, driving you insane. It promises glory and happiness but bloodshed must occur.

Why wouldn’t you take it?

You are no one.

You have no one.

A weapon is your friend and no one cares whether you live or die.

There is only 1 choice. Its better than none at all.

There will be 4 initial episodes.

Demo:
Legend of the Dragoon

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Bookmarked. I’m already enjoying this wip even though it only has the first mission. I liked that they different types of dragoon instead of just choosing a weapon. I’m guessing the MC is a bit a trouble maker with accidentally destruction but it’s fun all the same

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The path of strength for the dragon leads to an error. But the WIP is :+1:t2:

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This was super fun to read! I love the idea behind it and cannot wait to see what evolution our MC goes through. I am super excited to find out what happens next. (The first quest was BOMB btw. I had a lot of fun playing it)

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I saw Dragoons in the title and thought this was going to be some sort of game like the Dragoon series

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First update, I fixed just about everything and added the intro to the next adventure with a cameo.

Tell me any other issues and it’ll be fixed in the next update.

See ya!

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Do you mean the dragoon saga?

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Yea

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That saga has infinity in their names. Didnt know it even existed until you mentioned another one.

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I know it has infinity in its name

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there is an issue with the save slots

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Seems really interesting main problem I see tho is that their is not a single personality choice in the game I mean I get setting the story up but it’s really weird how it forces you to be a typical anime main character personality

Is that going to be added or

Also side note this isn’t on the main page of dashingdon

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Yeah I agree some different personalities are needed such as brooding, silent etc… Nothing else really needs changing apart from the saves being fixed

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So every adventure offers new stats to write. I write new stats as i go.

The prologue was to establish your character and dragon.

The first adventure was to establish your base abilities for you and your dragon.

The second adventure is literally that, establishing your personality for you and your dragon. Thats why chromatic and metallic are a thing.

A bit unorthadox to not do that at the beginning.

The main page is this one btw.

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Are we goin to get to choose a different weapon to use??

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No. A dragoon without their spear is like a paladin without their oath.

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Is it their a event or something that makes your characters personality change then because

For example if possible my character would go from being energetic talkative to stoic ruthless cruel
Interested to see how you do it

And by main page I mean if you go to dashingdon it is not listed the only way to get to the game from what I can see it the link here

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Sounds interesting need to be more but can’t wait for more

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The beginning of the second adventure near the end of the demo gives you a hint.

This will be the job that molds you into a real adventurer.

Edit: I’ve never actually updated my wip on there so thanks for that. You can check out my other wip.

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wow new gems.

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