WIP Grey Swan - Birds of a Rose Rewrite Update 21.9.24

Always picked the ruby ring because I like the nickname Rotkäppchen and how the Phoenix could be the big bad wolf preying on the innocent MC (innocent doesn’t mean helpless, clueless, or a damesel in distress obviously :pleading_face:)
But now I’m tempted to pick the blue ring just because :laughing: and excited for the day when it’s finally available! Also, of course we’re gonna take the punishment love or no love :triumph:

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Just read the newest update, and while I was initially unsure about this whole rewrite, I’ve rapidly warmed up to it as more and more was added.
Also, just because I was really curious if there was any way to get the blue ring in the game as is, and those dialogue choices which sounded like stat choices I started code diving and hot damn, and unless I misinterpreted something, is the Phoenix really from that particular family? Because if so that just makes my plans of going for a love triangle affair with my favorite Red Flag, and him/her a million times funnier/bloodier. (The blood may or may not be mine, probably.)

Besides that, I really do love your commitment to implementing reactivity to the various character choices, in particular all the different lines Droznik can have depending on your ring based nickname or characters reacting to the length of your hair, or if you’re skilled at art etc.

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This error happends on the bi route
Also how do you get the blue ring?

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So do I! Then I picked the option “there’s no wolf in my story”, and then a moment after went wait a minute…

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I am glad I managed to get that vibe across!

:no_mouth: i mean… they really couldnt have hidden it better, right? (sarcasm)

it determines more than just the colour and nickname :wink:

i decided to make sure people get it lol
phoenix is a walking red flag

i wanted to add a bit more german stuff and this just fit so perfectly!

Its so fun that the one werewolf that actually will show up isnt dangerous in any way, but i look forward to writing the interactions so much!

its new game plus!

And more to come!

not yet its new game plus, but I will have to add it for demo purposes

not saying anything :3 the phoenix just showed up one day

this will be quite…fun? or torture, depends!

Thank you! I love making those as tbh even your hair length has consequences in this environment and I want to reflect that

I uplaoded an update, i hope its fixed now!

new game plus!

:3 I so love coming up with those
and does a werewolf really counts as a wolf? :thinking: (yes fuchsia will comment a lot if the nickname is rotkäppchen!)

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For me it does, but other people may see it different(ly). :wolf:

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Are vampires/possibility of becoming one still a thing in this new version?

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Luckily Fuchsia isn’t a big bad wolf :grin:
Now that makes me wonder another thing…
What do werewolves look like in BOAR? :thinking:
Are they like the lycans from Underworld?
Are they bipedal with patchy furs…
Or are they on all fours with full (fluffy) furs? :laughing:

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It wouldnt be mine if I wouldnt let MC be able to become a Vampire!

Like normal wolves, a few bloodlines a bit bigger, bit more monsterlike, but nothing like the bipedal versions, I am sorry if you were hoping for those.

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Nope! I love both (every, honestly :sweat_smile:) versions of werewolves!
They all have their own charms! Thanks for answering btw :blush:

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I hope you will like mine (and Fuchsia)!
Haha, thats what I am here for.

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Found a few writing mistakes early In the beginning:

The reason you are here now, at the leadership school for the Divine Flock. A cosy building with dark wodden floors
Wodden => Wooden

Ark watches you with curiosity, blinking his black eyes at you, before he beats his wings and soars back into wherever he spends his time, leaving you with a craok
Craok => Croak

Always amazing story telling :heart:

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Thank you!

Those will be fixed with the next update!

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wow! first time checking this one after a few months and it’s totally different! excited to see where this new version will take us :+1:

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