Did you not even bother to read their main post?
Seems neat so far, though I am glad you have such faith in the community to let us aid you on your wips!
Minor inconsistency:
In the anarchist path, I made the driver press the privacy button after (I use my nanovores to open a hole over the driver and guard, making it easy to take them both out.) , then pressed it again myself after stopping the car.
There is currently no way to beat argent in book 1, either with the character generator or the randomizer.
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Wow, wasnât expecting this so soon. Well, you well know Iâll be along for the sequel.
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Yes, yes, yes! I didnât expect to see part of the sequel this soonâŚ
And now I need to play the first game again. When you talked about a possible Argent romance, I was wondering whether that was referring to my MC or my puppet. I really didnât think it would be my villain. And thereâs a whole new relationship variable, even. And hell yes, Iâll make my MCâs personal life even more complicated.
âŚTook one lot at the code and then quickly closed the window again.
You like punishing yourself, donât you?
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So much hype i canât wait to see were this goes plus i love the building youâre own criminal syndicate so awesome.
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Motivation choice spells âAll if this is inevitableâ
Your main rival character setup choice âYourselfâ and âYour past selfâ might be a bit confusing to some readers.
You can choose âNo one knows heâs a telepathâ and then pick "Argent thinks heâs a cheater for using his mental powers."
Oh iâll edit that one then!
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OMFG I canât believe this. The play test is out already! @malinryden when did you start writing book 2?
Bug?
And I never met Mia Ochoa and chose the choice that I never met her but she is frequently talked about like I knew her.
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I donât think it is confusing
yourself, is what you are now⌠a villain
past self was your previous self⌠hero or vigilante 
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I nearly cried fighting Argent and I couldnât stop the maniacal grin on my face I literally could not stop it.
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also SteelâŚisnât on the list of rivalâŚ
Randomly generated stats at start
CLASSIFIED
Subject: Retribution
Secret Identity: Cynthia Millar
Gender: Female
Description:
Cynthia Millar is a seasoned, tech-savvy tactician.
Physical Status
Stamina: You are rested.
Willpower: You feel rested.
Injuries: You are fine, with no significant wounds.
Telepathy
Strength of Mind: 75%
Subtle Manipulations: 55%
Armored Suit
Retributionâs suit is utilitarian and nondescript.
In its left hand, the suit has a neutered colony of nanovores functionally similar to having a disintegration touch, as well as being equipped with enhanced strength and telepathic boosters.
Armor Status
Need Repair: 0% Fine: 100%
Retribution.
Infamy: 2% Obscurity: 98%
Standard of Living: You are poor.
You are living in your old, shitty apartment.
Psychological Profile
Arrogance: 40% Anonymity: 60%
Ruthlessness: 70% Empathy: 30%
Daring: 60% Caution: 40%
Main Puppet
Name: Lee
Puppet Status: fine
Description: A tall, arab man in his twenties with brown eyes and long straight black hair.
Allies and Enemies
Cynthiaâs relationship with Ortega: former ally.
Ortega and Cynthia: 40%
Leeâs relationship with Ortega: acquaintance.
Ortega and Lee: 35%
Leeâs relationship with Dr. Mortum: frosty.
Mortum and Lee: 50%
Cynthiaâs relationship with Lady Argent: amiable.
Lady Argent and Cynthia: 30%
Cynthiaâs relationship with Marshal Steel: former ally.
Marshal Steel and Cynthia: 30%
Cynthiaâs relationship with Herald: friendly.
Herald and Cynthia: 40%
Randomly generated stats at end
CLASSIFIED
Subject: Retribution
Secret Identity: Cynthia Millar
Gender: Female
Description:
Cynthia Millar is a seasoned, tech-savvy fighter.
Physical Status
Stamina: You are rested.
Willpower: You feel rested.
Injuries: You are fine, with no significant wounds.
Telepathy
Strength of Mind: 55%
Subtle Manipulations: 75%
Armored Suit
Retributionâs suit is terrifying to look at, a monster garbed in forbidden science.
In its left hand, the suit has a neutered colony of nanovores functionally similar to having a disintegration touch, as well as being equipped with enhanced strength and telepathic boosters.
Armor Status
Need Repair: 0% Fine: 100%
Retribution. Retribution hunts the heroes of Los Diablos
Infamy: 38% Obscurity: 62%
Standard of Living: You are well-off.
You are living in your old, comfortable apartment.
Psychological Profile
Arrogance: 42% Anonymity: 58%
Ruthlessness: 58% Empathy: 42%
Daring: 70% Caution: 30%
Main Puppet
Name: Yasmin
Puppet Status: fine
Description: A short, arab woman in her twenties with brown eyes and long straight black hair.
Allies and Enemies
Cynthiaâs relationship with Ortega: itâs complicated.
Ortega and Cynthia: 50%
Yasminâs relationship with Ortega: semi-officially dating.
Ortega and Yasmin: 60%
Yasminâs relationship with Dr. Mortum: fake friend.
Mortum and Yasmin: 70%
Cynthiaâs relationship with Lady Argent: amiable.
Lady Argent and Cynthia: 30%
Lady Argentâs interest in Retribution.: 37%
Cynthiaâs relationship with Marshal Steel: former ally.
Marshal Steel and Cynthia: 30%
Cynthiaâs relationship with Herald: distant.
Herald and Cynthia: 20%
The puppet and armour type completely changes by end of the chapter.
Also, maybe a case of 2 variables firing at the same time?
@malinryden I still hate myself for playing with Ortega. She wants love and its messed up if my MC gives her that and still finds the resolve to take her down when she gets in his way. 
(i blame myself and you, i didnt have to go down this path but your writing makes the emotional parts awesome)
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Why you gotta mess with my Ortega!!! Dear lord she a angel!!! A angel that deserves huggles and lots of love!!!
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My puppets relationship with the good doctor was flirting, but nothing more (went alone to the galla). Which seems to be missing from the choices. - This does seem to come up in the text, since the relationship with Mortum is brought up.
Stats at the start
Summary
Strenght 55
Sublte 75
Infame 10
Arrogance 25
Ruthless 10
Daring 25
Chris - Ortega 75
Puppet - Ortega 35
Puppet - Mortum 70
Chris - Argent 0
Chris Herald 40
Stats at the end (Only the one which changed.)
Summary
Infame 14
Arrogance 14
Ruthless 9
Daring 21
Chris - Ortega 77
maybe soâŚbut in book 1âŚhe is on the list lol
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That is absolutelyâŚthe bluish shrug I have ever seen
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