@malinryden Oh I noticed some more bugs…
- In chapter 13 I got this (I bolded the line that seemed to come out of nowhere):
The rain helps with that, people hurry their step, heading to their destinations as fast as they can. You try to match the annoyance you can see on their faces as you escape into the foyer of the Rangers’ headquarter, dripping wet.
You can’t help but wonder why she bothers.
Part of you hates this. Hates what you’re doing. What you’re planning. Destroying yourself. Destroying your friendships, your legacy…
I poked at the code, looks like this bit is meant to be nested under a condition for checking MC’s facial scar? But it’s just floating out on its own now.
- With heartbreak scar of revenge, I’m getting the following weird continuity in the psych scene:
“It makes no sense.” You shake your head. “Why care in the first place?”
“Do I need a reason?”
“Everyone has a reason, you said so yourself.”
“I’m concerned about you.” Dr. Finch frowns, and you can feel her trying to read your face. “I want to help you, but I can’t do that unless you talk to me.”
She means it. You can feel that. She’s worried, but she’s not sure what’s wrong with you. No wonder, you’re not sure anything is wrong. You’re feeling like shit, sure, but does that really matter?
What matters is that you keep working towards your goal.
Revenge might not be the noblest of motivations, but it will have to do. Hate might not be a good feeling, but it’s not like the people you’re hating are good either. Fighting fire with fire might not be the smartest thing to do, but it gets you what you want.
You’re not about to give up now, you know what you want and you know how to get it. You won’t let them get away with doing this to you. No way.
“It’s not that simple.” The truth tastes like the last dregs of yesterday’s beer.
“How do you mean” Her frown has deepened, she almost looks worried. “Are you talking about revenge?”
My MC didn’t say anything related to revenge at that point, so Dr. Finch’s last line seems to come from nowhere. Seems like there’s a missing dialogue MC line about “making them pay” that appears with the revenge motivation but under different Heartbreak scars normally? (my god I continue to be in awe of you wrangling all this code, just looking at the psych scene makes my mind boggle)
Minor, but after choosing to wipe Dr. Finch’s mind, it seems odd that the MC still has the option to say ““I don’t hate her,” I admit, the closest I can get to praise.” considering that the MC at that point is probably planning to never go back again. I’m actually not too sure about the “Not cured yet” choice too, tbh. Maybe another line to Ortega about how MC is definitely never going back again?
Post-psych scene, a line “how much this session affected you” kind of repeats oddly after choosing to hang out with Ortega as puppet.
“Take care, okay?” You do your best to ignore the worry in her eyes as you turn and leave.
You don’t want her to see how much this session affected you.
Honestly, you don’t want to feel how much this session affected you. And in a little, you won’t have to. Lee will make everything better. You know he will.