The strong need of giving not-so-useful feedback to the author was what made me register an account here.
I am a story person. I’d wager I consumed close to a four digit number of works of literature (and most certainly four digit if you count every short story as one). Fallen Hero: Rebirth was the first (and so far the only) one where I was able to identify with the main character. Kudos to you and thank you.
PS. Apologies for not being very constructive but I really don’t want to spoil myself the second part by reading unfinished alpha.