My character, seeing himself as a broken toy ultimately unworthy of love, is in love with Ortega as Adam Greene, the former sidekick Sidestep, Dr Mortum’s girlfriend as Eve the doll, and is now dating Argent as Anathema the supervillain.
It’s not cheating if you’re different people, right?
I’m sure it will all crash and burn in entertaining ways.
Feel like I’m the only one dating one person in this game. Personally done with Ortega to much past baggage. My MCs dating Argent, took off the mask and everything for her.
Technically your not dating if you didn’t take the mask off, at best it’s just light flirtation. And if you do take the make off she’s now dating the MC aka Sidestep.
How I do understand… there could be only one romance here #OrtegaIsLife!
The other day I was listening to Madonna “Music” album(don’t judge me ) and when “I Deserve It” started I automatically thought “Oh, Ortega…”
This guy was meant for me
And I was meant for him
This guy was dreamt for me
And I was dreamt for him
I must be as bad as Sidestep bc a bitch literally cannot make up her mind.
Do I wanna smooch Ortega? Obviously. Okay but do I also want Argent to tie me to a chair and have her way with-- not even a question, yes. Those impulses fall somewhere between me wanting to tease Herald and make him blush and wanting to take over the known Universe with Mortum.
By the way, your story is so awesomely compelling. Ive been trying to take notes to help improve my own writing since Ive always felt there was something I lacked in mine. Thanks a lot!
I’m hoping at some point the MC can fake their death, as I think it’s a pretty bad idea in general to be associated with any ranger members, perhaps the puppet or Argent can wear the villain suit and “kidnap” the MC and blackmail Ortega into doing your bidding.
YOU HEARTLESS MONSTER! Hasn’t Ortega already suffered enough having to bury MC once? You’ll have to face Ortega fan club even for suggesting something like that!
So becoming a super-villain and public menace to society and having the option to massacre countless innocent civilians is okay, but breaking wee Ortega’s heart again is what crosses the line.
Oh boy, you thought I was serious? You think I wouldn block the path of a story for a fictional character’s sake… come on!
You want my serious point of view about your post? MC never wanted a happily everafter ending where he will disappear in the sunset, MC is ready to burn in their rage taking taking down whoever needs to be taken down on the path. Why would MC fake his death, just to live a few more months hidden underground? That time is over and it would diminsh the value of their actions. To quote a famous comic/movie “What was done to me was monstrous / Then they created a monster.” We are the monsters, we are the fire to purge our enemies.
Only my point of view tho, there could be like a thousand other paths.
I really don’t think that they would consider it that unbelievable, Herald would be easy to fool, Argent wouldn’t give a shit considering she doesn’t known who you are or hasn’t teamed up with you, I can only see Ortega being suspicious if he already suspects your the villain, other than that he may be in denial of such a reality at first, but he would eventually accept it. Steel is really the only one that I think would be a little suspicious, but only a little suspicious, nowhere close to being full blown convinced.