Oh my God, every time i play this demo i discover something new
You knowā¦ when I first played Rebirth I was annoyed at the start by the fact that the path of the MC seemed to be already decided and that there was little space for choices. By the end of your first book I was in love with your workā¦ the way you write, the layers of the story falling one on top of the other giving more and more sense in a very charming and not railroaded way made me fall in love with your work!
I am always late when it comes to demo or wip, I try to avoid them in order to savor the final gameā¦ but I couldnāt resist, and the new chapters, the story proceding deeper and deeper, itās even more amazing than I thought it could have been!
Thanks for your amazing work, a thousand times thank you for giving me something to love!
Back in my day all we talked about on this thread was breaking Heralds legs and how fuckable Ortega is now a days itās all actually helpful critiques and stuff grumble grumble
You know itās funny, I play my characterās rage as more focused.
Heās not going to kill innocents or heroes, although they might get the living daylights beaten out of them.
But heās going to reveal the truth- The regenes, the heartbreak incident, etc.
Then heās going to kill those people responsible.
Just killing them isnāt enough, though, people need to know why they had it coming. They have to be destroyed first- Their power, their wealth, their respectability just tatters at their feet for all to see.
So the fact that Herald annoys my character so much? Thatās just embarrassing.
Oo I play mine similarly although my motivation is to āshow the world the truthā
Hi! I think I found a glitch. During the showdown with Jake. I used the gun on him, unleashed a creepy knife person, tried to not look like a meal and failed, and suddenly Iām in the tunnels with Argent and Jake is nowhere to be found.
Iām all about punching Herald face and let Ortega āChargeā inā¦
Well, I canāt exactly say neither of those things are on my to-do list.
Yummy.
I believe another reader already spotted this, but thereās a puppet pronoun error in the conversation between Dr Mortum and the villain. The good Doctor referred to my puppet as āhimā accidentally.
Random blurb of softness I just thought of:
Summary
It occurs to me that one possible end for the story for some players is their villain being redeemed, but then the Rangers (or more specifically Ortega) start watching videos of your villain personaās ābragging and bombasticā monologues on loop. This scenario is made even funnier if the mc is actually normally shy, and quiet.
A deeply embarrassed Sidestep: āWhy? Why are you watching that crap again?!ā
Ortega after sharing a look with Herald, and Argent: āBecause this is a whole other side to you, and we need to remember how far you take things when we donāt keep an eye on you.ā
Sidestep dramatically storms out: āArgh!ā
Side noteāI could totally see Ana doing that. XD
So, were you made into a Re-gene or some shit. Wtf happened to the MC after the Heartbreak incident? Im really fucking confused.
I love your āblurb of softnessā idea.
assumably the mc was taken back to the farm
Meaning? I get that the farm is where the MC was taken after Heartbreak, but what did they do to them there?
Discipline (Torture the fuck out of) the naughty puppy who ran away. It seems to be implied the MC was always a Regene not made into one
Wait, but the Mc tried to get rid of the barcode tattoo things, but wouldnt that mean that they didnt always have them?
Re-Genes are basically vat grown.
You canāt be made into a Re-Gene. The MC is a Re-Gene (a cuckoo specifically), theyāve been one the whole time. They want to get rid of the orange markings presumably so they can live a normal life, not having to cover up their whole body all the time. (And for some mcs, so they can get surgery)
No. Just because they have always had them dosnt mean they donāt want to get rid of them. They act like a human, and want to be a human. So having a literal barcode and probably a āReturn to ownerā tag somewhere on their would just be a constant reminder to them that they arnt, and a reminder to anyone else that āHoly fuck one of those creepy spec op fuckers! I aināt banging that!ā Or something.
So what your telling me, is that i have the complete and utter wrong idea of just about everything in this story? I thought the MC was human.
Ooo surgery? Iām assuming a certain choice during HB incident permanently fucks you or something?