I hate letting something unfinished out of my sight in the first place. This thread is reliant on people understanding that it it is unfinished, I even added that in large capital letters at the end of the latest chapter.
The moment my annoyance levels with people treating this as a finished game exceeds the help I get from people finding continuity errors and pathing issues, I will drop this thread like hot coal. There are enough people that can help me with that off the grid.
I value my mental peace of mind more than speedy development.
Ok ;-;
(The little thing down below this is just to show that I understand that alphas are WIPs not an attempt at sass blasting by the way)
Well my only problems with the new update is that itās still WIP, some scenes being a bit wacky, restrictive or simply not there, and needs fix ups and what nots but as you stated this is alpha so itās not a big deal as that simply needs pointing out before you find time to fix it which with your track record is less of a if and more of a when since you are quite good at what you do.
And I would personally like to say that while many may have missed the point of the thread that there are also many others that truly do value this point of the month where your lovely project gets given to the public eye.
If you do wish to remove this however I do understand, since being sass blasted for reasons you shouldnāt or having numerous spelling mistake comments may get annoying.
So yeah up to you I suppose chief.
though if you need a beta tester Iām your man chief wink wink nudge nudge I love you sempai
So to be crystal clear, this is less about throwing our two cents on creative ideas and meant exclusively for ensuring that grammar, continuity, or spelling issues are spotted?
Not at all trying to be a smartass or anything. I just want to make sure I wasnāt overstepping my bounds and, if so, know where those bounds are.
At this point it is mostly for what was posted below, especially the continuity issues. Like My character knew this, but talked like they didnāt, or I have no idea who this is but my character acts like they do and so on.
No use for spelling or grammar, it will get rewritten anyway, this is not the final prose.
The problem with throwing out creative ideas is that a lot of the time they are things that are not added yet (and which I have repeatedly said would be added later). For example, there are very few stat checks or stat adds, most chapters do not have heartbreak scar effects, RO paths are not finished, nb paths are not there, a lot of the criminal style things are not there, effects for the look of your armor, the whole villainy and infamy levelsā¦ everything which I deem minor variables are not there yet.
This is just the plot spine. I need that to work before I can start decorating it. That is why it is not a beta, just an alpha.
A lot of the time things like that just makes me very frustrated because I feel the urge to go in and say āalready planned, not just added yetā and after enough time it just makes me tired and annoyed.
I managed to kiss her. You need at leat 50+ relation with your villain. I kept 40 plus relationship with my MC aswell. You need to always be flirty and willing to fight head on. She enjoys fighting
Yeah, possibly? When I say that itās just that I never planned to āromanceā her, the gay just jumped out of me and hit that button. I donāt know if Iāll make it canon for this character (although maybe, itās pretty funny).
Sheās currently in a relationship with Ortega, which I find kinda funny in case he ever calls her out. āYou like disastrous villains? Shit, me tooā:
TRACKING! clicks in head There were a couple times that I noticed that in game but didnāt do much thought about it thinking (shocker) that it would be ironed out in the completed game. I brain not work gud lol
That is fair
That is also fair. I generally have garnered a bit of the āearly demo accessā view to WIPs. Iāll be sure to take my notifications more seriously when regarding this (and other similarly specified) games.
It seems to, for me, only trigger if Iāve gone into her mind and made her like my MC self. In my ānormieā playthrough she never asks if I was the one to control her.
I will say that that scene was hot af. Very nice stuff and pure evidence that she surpasses all other ROs.
Showing a part of yourself is the only way sheāll let you keep the goober. Iām not sure about actually getting her to āturn to the darksideā though.
Thereās a slight scripting error in the auction scene where if you choose to enter the auction as your villain, donāt manage to contact argent before the lights go out, trigger the lights out early to get the gun, then go backstage for the regenerator, youāll see argent trying to steal it and blow a hole in the floor. After that comes the option to follow her, but if you do that, you get shunted into a loop where you get popped back out into the fight against the two henchmen. Iām not quite sure if itās an intentional placeholder or a legit bug, but Iām putting it up here just in case.
I would post the relevant code section, but Iām having trouble finding it in the massive document.
Found a couple things in the auction while talking to Mortum as the villain
Summary
June is not here. You must be quite aware of her thoughts." Thereās a faint twitch to his hand. āAnd what he really feels about you. And me.ā
The he here should be she in this case.
She does nothing but lie to you."
āI would trust her over you any day. Good day.ā
āYou are right, I do not,ā he says, looking at his watch.
āYou are right, I do notā comes immediately after Mortum says theyād rather trust the puppet, it feels like MC is missing a line.
Your gasp comes from shock as much as surprise when she kisses you.
This seems a bit redundant the way itās worded right now
Edit: nvm someone else found the loop
Also extremely pedantic, but the choice āI feel the same, but now Iām afraidā seems a little odd to be be under the āI feel differentlyā choice. the feelings are still fundamentally the same so I donāt think I would have noticed that option if I didnāt have an mc with a larger difference in attraction.
closer to the beginning of the game
Part of you wonder if you would dare to remove the helmet and let people know who you really are.
This appears even if you are a boss and say they know your face.
But thereās no outside enemy, not this time. Just your hidden fears, and they canāt protect you from that.
No Iām just gushing, I found that quoted bit particularly sweet. It does sound kind of grim now that I look at it and read it though. Pretty sure that if anything did happen Iād probably actually cry
No, they are just a sweet pea trying to help the MC all the time. There is a possible fight with a big bad guy depending on your choices and one of the lines is like, the Rat King is terrified but not about to abandon you to fight alone
There was just a lot of fan art and sobbing on tumblr about our cute disembodied rat bro and Malin is tugging our heart strings.
Hey I donāt know if this is what you want, but it seems like the fight with the mods is looped and when you order fish when going out with Orterga you get a Hamburger.
nooo my heaaaaart aaaaaahh 
