(WIP) Era of the Archdemons I The complete reset I 20K words [Update 2/28/24]

Behold my first IF.
If you’ve played the previous edition, then you’ll be familiar with this one. Its improved with the beginning of the first chapter & prologue. Don’t want to spoil so I’ll let it be a surprise. The archdemons are completely redone as is the world. I’ve only begun writing in CS for 2 weeks but feel like I’ve made much progress. Expect continued updates.

here is the demo: https://dashingdon.com/go/15649

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I like it :ok_hand:

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Pretty good for an unfinished prologue. The writing is enjoyable and pace feels good so far for a prologue at least. But not much to go on, but that said the genre, concept and what you have here so far, have definitely captivated my attention. So I’ll be watching how this story fares.

SIDE Note: You might want watch out for whole page encompassing paragraphs. Because they can be a bit jarring. Saw a few typos nothing major, pretty normal demo stuff. Also this line repeats. Plus this scene is the one with all encompassing paragraph. So 2 or 3 spacing out would be good.

Otherwise great work, and looking forward to more demon backgrounds.
Cliffhangers…
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Very promising! Can’t wait to see all the arcdemons explored in depth

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@Sylents, The idea is ambitious and intreguing I like it. The prologue is very good and I don’t see any bugs. I wil watching this. I very like it the story and the stile. I can’t talk about mechanichs yet. Keep going.

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Time to enjoy :wink: :smiling_imp:

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If all the Arcdemons got into a fight who would come out on top? I’m guessing the Arcdemon of war :skull:

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pretty well done, excited to see where this goes

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Loved the prologue, a bit much to chew. But since it’s a prologue I believe it shall be forgiven. On that note of the prologue loved the unique twist of 4th wall breaking.

Saw some typos, here and there but nothing Super major. Otherwise I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes. Bookmarked and put on watch. Keep up the great work, but be sure not to burn yourself out too.

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Ah gotcha :ok_hand:

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Welcome to the reset.

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looks good but sadly a bit to short to say much about , keeping a eye on it waiting for more like the idea tough

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