Life, Tyranny, Revolution and medieval England. A book by N. Kuprevics
Hello fellow readers. I want to post my first WIP game-book for review, constructive criticism and to hear your thoughts about it. This is just the very beginning of the book, the intro. About 3800 words. The book is realistic but ahistorical. It combines historical characters with unhistorical events. The setting is England, in year 1224. You play as a character, defined by you, from birth to death.
Features
-a political map that updates throughout the game based on many factors
-a system of traits (not yet implemented fully)
-play as female or male character
Things to noteā¦
-nothing is final and everything is subject to change!
-many of planned features are not yet added or not completed fully.
-I am not a native English speaker, so please ignore or at lest do not post your critique based on that. If everything goes as planned, I will fix all errors and spelling and increase the amount of word and sentence variety. This is just a mock-up.
Things that you can do to help me
-post your review
-if possible, post your choices
-post whenether you want to have an option to play as female character. (very important and helpful)
Link
Removed for now
Latest update in writing process 01.05
A lot of work on later parts of the game. Hit 7k words today.