Chapter 5 (6) is out !!
SO. A lot changed. It took me a really long time for no reason. I feel like I could have done this in a week but it took like, two. Anyway, I’ll start with the changes I made to the first chapter.
~ Chapter 1 is combined with chapter 2! It starts the same, but the rest after you wake up has a different plotline. Maybe it is better than the first two chapters that were there before. Maybe not. It’s confusing now, because all the chapters moved back one. I don’t have much to say about it.
~ Chapter 5 is out! You get to talk with the rest of The Six. The whole point of the chapter is to basically impress them. How you treat them will also affect your skills relating to each of them, and the Spirit Realms’ opinion of you. The only part I really like about it is Validum’s.
~ There are more stats that relate to your personalityyyyy. I think they will be important later. I went back to fairmath. I don’t even know what fairmath is, but I’m using it, and now the stats are weird percentages that LOOK U G L Y. But it’s okay. It should work okay. Maybe I think fairmath is different from what it actually is and I’m using it wrong. It’s okay.
~ I changed a tiny bit of 3 and 4, if I’m remembering right. Nothing major.
~ The quotes at the beginning of each chapter are different, and tell a story about the lion, Leo. It’s not really that important.
I think that’s everything. Let me know how the first chapter flows with the rest now. Probably not well. But it’s okay. I’ve been thinking a lot about my characters and what I want them to be. At first, I only made characters other than Leo because I thought I needed more than just one. Saro and Theta are useless. But I thought about them a lot and developed them. In my head at least. I like them more now.