Play as a cursed pseudo-amnesiac who only remembers agony. Set in a fantasy world that is a lot darker then it is on the surface, relearn your memories and find your new place in the world. What happened to those who remember you? Will you be able to return to before you were cursed? And just what is a Corruptant?
Hey all! I’ve finally mustered the courage to post my WIP, Corruptant. This is actually my second IF project that I’ve worked on and am happy to post this for the community to enjoy. I’m looking for a few different types of feedback:
Most obvious are typos, pronoun issues and other grammar snafus.
Not as obvious are pacing and general story feedback. No guarantees that suggestions will be incorporated, but I will take all that in mind.
More specifically, I am interested if the descriptions of the characters are good enough, and any feedback on that directly. I always feel like I struggle with that.
Way more nichely, if any of you decide to look at the code of the game, any tips or advice on coding would be greatly appreciated as well!
The Binder. Leo/Leia Everix [M/F]
A usually soft spoken and timid individual, Everix has been given the task of being binded to you and keep you under control. Something they don’t seem to really want to do. Will anything come of you two being close together?
The Second Born. Hayes Rentham [M/F]
The second born of the reigning monarch, Hayes was placed on a team with you by their father. However, Hayes is quite the rebellious person constantly flaunting the rules with a confident smirk the whole time. Will you to bond while being on a team?
The Best Friend. Sam [M/F]
The person that you were closest to for so long. It’s been a long time since you’ve seen them. You remember them as someone filled with optimism and childlike wonder. Have they changed since? And will you be able to overcome your demons and bond with them?
Quinn. The Scholar [F]
An eccentric scholarly type that is responsible for keeping track of a lot of lore as well as arcane things. She seems to be obsessed with everything to do about the occult, and that includes you. Will you two overcome that obsession and for a true bond?
Maverick, The Cultist [M]
A quiet and somewhat crazy cultist that only will speak to you. He finds himself working for the same people as you in similar circumstances. Yet he seems to know something about you that you just don’t. Will you two bond thanks to your similar situation?
From a content wise perspective, this is definitely a darker story with some darker themes. Torture, death, madness, a bit of abuse and suicidal thoughts. So do be warned about that!
Here’s the link and hope you enjoy it!
FEB 8th, 2024: Posted with 22k words.
FEB 14th, 2024: Updated to 53k words!
FEB 23rd, 2024: Updated to 70k words!