One bug I found was that it refers to The Elk leader later toward the end as 85 and the the Boar Leader as 15.
Anyways, I loved the book (even though it was kind of short) and can’t wait for more/ the next book.
There is an error when I choose to start a fire to distract the watchmen after sabotaging the weapons.
chapter52 line 66: Expeted option starting with #
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No bother at all! I just fixed that, thanks for showing me
That does look a lot more professional, how do you edit your topics? I know I did it a fe days ago but it was by accident and I have no idea how to do it again xD
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Fixed now 
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Thanks so much for all the support and help from everyone, I have just sent off a polished, more complete version of what is on the link above to Choice of Games LLC, and fingers crossed, it will soon be a hosted game. Wish me luck!
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Good luck, I want to play the game right away. 
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Great, and if you have time after id love to hear what you think!
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Look at your post, and find this icon/button below it > … <
Click it, and you will find a pencil icon or known as Edit Post button.
Now, paste what I suggested to you if you like. 
hahaha
It only shows a delete button or the editing history, not an actual option… btw I am using a computer, also it says i DONT HAVE THE PRMISSION to delete so maybe i dont have the permission to edit? Not sure why…
I’m not 100% positive but this issue has come up before and I think it’s related to trust levels. You’re still at basic, so you might need to go up to member before you can edit your posts.
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Not sure if this is the end of the demo, but I can’t get past the point where you destroy the weapons. There is an error if you try to kill the guard, take the horses, or create a fire.
E.g “chapter52 line 122: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 23” or “chapter52 line 56: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block”
Cheer mate. Thanks for a cracking demo.
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Cheers! There’s a good bit more to follow after that scene, I’m pretty sure it’s all fixed now
Hey mate, it appears all three parts now have different errors?
Cheers. : )
chapter52 line 78: Invalid indent? Expected an #option here, not *goto - Fire
chapter52 line 171: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block - Guard
chapter52 line 58: Expected option starting with # - Horse
I tested through that issue, problem’s fixed now!
I have added a sneak peak to book 2 at the end as well as a proper romance scene, enjoy!
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At ch 7, the 4 choices such as why are you working with the Vikings, etc are bugged. I can’t get past that it says invalid.
I believe I have fixed it, are you talking about the part where you ask
But you are supposed to be…etc
But my father sent…etc
How do refugees…etc
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This is a great story and WIP!
I enjoyed the depth of each character as well as all the political and social intrigue.
Quick question: Are there going to be any short or long term romances in the game besdues the healer as well as the ability to get married, have affairs, etc?
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Yes that scene when you have to go meet the Vikings.
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