Hi everyone, my name is Jo and this is the first game I make. In this game, you can play as a heir to the throne of Egrus. There will be magic, intrigue, adventures as usual, but you are not forced to be good at all times. You can even romance villains as RO (though they may not be considered as villains … from a certain point of view XD). There may also be plot twists, but the reader’s perception of truth matters here.
Types of feedback
Writing. Since English is not my first language, I very much appreciate if anyone can spot spelling, grammar, expression errors etc.
Connections. Plot holes.
Stats. I am still not sure what are the stats that can be useful here, and how large a role stats should play.
About minorities. I grow up in a conservative environment, so I am not very familiar with the minority cultures. I will try to google and include the most accurate descriptions, but they can be wrong. So please correct me if you find something that is odd or offensive. I will correct them once I get enough free time.
Bugs. Any type of bugs count.
- Lady Valerie
You two basically grow up together, but you don’t think you know everything about her. She has a complicated family background, with her father as the current Hand and her mother from the noble houses in Ospea (a country that is defeated by Egrus years ago). There are also some actions that make her loyalty questionable. Still, she is a bright and determined young woman woman, who is willing to defy the norm in order to get to her goal.
As for the questionable loyalty part, that depends on how you play the game. I can’t spoil more, but eventually there will be an understanding.
The bastard brother to Queen Udelle of Ashar, your neighbouring country. Ambitious, intelligent, and gifted with words. Too bad that he is also a power-hungry schemer who are willing to do everything to get to the top. Your mother and Lord Gabriel are wary of him. Later the MC will discover some hidden depths. Cassius may be more than what he appears, in aspects such as … morality. Again, this depends on how you play the game.
Jamil is a knight you met during one of your expeditions. He seems to be a demi-god cursed by the Dark God Soses. The god your country worship, Duarus, offers to help but he has to prove that he is worthy first. That’s why he decides to serve you, one who is blessed by Duarus, to prove his worth. He has grown to like you over the years. He is a legendary fighter and is extremely loyal.
The goddess herself. According to the religion in Egrus and Ashar, Qikuna and Duarus are complimentary parts of a single being named Unity. You don’t know if this is true, but Qikuna certainly has a lot of secrets. She is widely-praised for her wisdom and compassion.
They are the villain in your religion. Yet when you know them, you think there may be another side to the story. They are the god of Chaos, and the arch enemy to Duarus.
Prince Feodor/Princess Francene
A sweet, kind, gentle soul. He/She loves poetry and music, prefers honesty over half-lies constantly told by people in the court. Current heir to the queen of Ashar, he/she might one day become the ruler. Yet his/her mother thinks that he is weak-willed and prefer his/her younger sister Thea. Therefore Queen Udelle decides to ‘use him/her for marriage’. However, if you choose to help him/her win his/her mother’s approval, your marriage to him/her may bring the two kingdoms together.
Or you can choose not to romance/marry anyone.
Thank you for reading my work!