An argument that was settled and banned by mods last August.
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Yeah, please don’t dig up old debates, and especially don’t start insulting people about them. Thanks!
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Hey, thank you for the heads up! 
I’ll fix it asap.
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Glad I could help!
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I’m honestly unsure how that managed to slip my notice, but thank you for the help (again)! 
I just uploaded a new version, so now it should be fixed.
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Found a rather big one, Iris’s mom talk to you as if you ran away with Iris even if you haven’t seen Iris yet or at all at the party.
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Thank you, it should be fixed now!
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It’s weird to me that Iris and my MC act like they don’t know each other at the party even though they became friends and she kissed him at the festival earlier in the story
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Hey, the whole parade section was actually rewritten back in February (it was much shorter) so the puppet show scene where you can first meet Iris is younger than Chapter 2. Because of that, (after I finally release the revision I’m currently working on) the first Chapter 2 scene with her will play out differently for those who met Iris before.
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Ah ok that makes total sense then. And good luck with the rewrite!
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Thank you, I’ll add a warning to that scene in a minute - just to avoid any confusion.
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I require revenge! I love it so far. 
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Just played through the demo and I enjoyed it very much! You managed to make the world feel well-developed already, plus the characters are fairly fleshed out which I definitely liked. Throughout the first chapter, I was like “please don’t kill my family” and well… I got what I wanted, but at what cost? 
You wrote one of the best and fleshed out families I’ve seen in a WIP in a hot minute, I felt so bad for our mom at the end of Chapter 2. Plus Julia is an absolute menace lol. For the ROs, I’m already enjoying the PC’s dynamic with Iris, specifically for the bold/shameless flirt PC. My PC’s really gonna miss Iris and her endless yap sessions lol.
My one gripe is probably the coding issues with pronouns and stuff, the characters kept referring to my PC as a guy and using he/him pronouns in some scenes even though my PC is a girl. But I get it, coding is confusing lol.
Anyway, can’t wait for more!
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Hey everyone!
I hope you’re all doing great! Just wanted to let you know that I’ve finally uploaded the revised Chapter 2!
This update brings 80k additional words of new variations and adjustments to better fit the Chapter 1 rewrite, rewritten text, and new choices. There are a lot of new variables, so you will need to start a new save to play the update.
What’s new?
- The previously locked WIP choices are now fully playable!
- Reconnect with Iris if you met her in Chapter 1.
- For those of you who asked the blacksmith in Chapter 1 to forge a weapon for you, you’ll finally be able to “get acquainted with it.”
- There’s also a new optional dynamic in Iris’s route. I don’t want to give too much away, but let’s just say it’s connected to the path where your MC cuts ties with their mother.
- A new optional scene with Nemio where you’ll get to dig a little deeper into who he is and maybe even uncover some clues about the Council’s rather sudden decision.
- A new subplot where your MC can develop a one-sided crush on Nemio—and more!
On a more technical note, I’ve done my best to squash any bugs I could find, but if you spot any inconsistencies, errors, or things that seem off, please let me know!
Link to the updated demo: [Here]
I had to temporarily cut the new Zenon relationship options—they needed more development, and I didn’t want to delay this update further (plus, I really wanted to continue the story). Don’t worry, though—I’ll add them later (likely after Chapter 4). While I don’t plan to revisit this chapter for at least the next two chapters, I’d still love to hear your thoughts. If you have any feedback, critiques, or suggestions, feel free to share them with me!
Thank you all for your patience and support. I hope you enjoy the new content!
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Hey! Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed it! Sorry for the really late reply - I was quite busy at the time, and when I did have time to reply, I just kind of forgot to.
I’m still very new to writing and coding in general, and as I said before, it’s one of the first writings I made in English that extends more than a couple thousand words. So, for this reason, it’s incredibly encouraging to see that so many people liked it or at least had some fun while reading it.
Yeah, coding can be tricky and time-consuming for me—I often double-check things endlessly and still make mistakes. The pronoun issue isn’t really a coding problem, though; it’s more about my ability to spot these errors. I have to put each player-related pronoun (he/him/his, brother, lord, son, etc.) inside a ${}. The more specific terms (like brother or lord) are easier since there are fewer of them, but he/him/his are everywhere, so I might miss a few. If you (or anyone else) spot any errors, just let me know, and I can fix it in like 10 seconds.
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What are the chances, I just started a new playthrough and the game gets a huge update. Can’t wait to enjoy it!
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@Notlev
I’m in love w the update 
I have noticed that despite the code, I’m not showing my charm stat lower in the parade/festival scenes, like at the puppet show, for example
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I still feel that the relationship with the little sister is both too heavy-handed and too one way. Why can’t we have distance from her without being an asshole? She’s absolutely suffocating!
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I think the family in this WIP is one of my favorite, the mom is interesting and the sister is so cute.
Glad we’re finally getting our weapon. It serves as a memento too now.
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