I haven’t done a lot on it. Just the intro where you choose your name and all that. It’s my first game so I’m looking for criticism and advice.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/fpwwvchtolph1uz/mygame_complete.html?dl=0
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it look promising but its to short to judge so waiting for more to see how it goes also kind off a bummer that we didn’t fight the unicorn.
ps: give the game a name even if its temporarily makes it easier to remember.
@djma46 Haha yeah, don’t worry you will fight Unicorn eventually. It’s 1.24 am where I am so I’m going to sleep but tomorrow (technically today) I’ll work on it some more and update it.
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So far i like what you so far I’m really interested to see what happens next
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You need some work on the fluency at the start, you use “You” way too many times in a row to start a sentence. I personally think you should do some work on that aswell
It’s a good start, certainly, but I can’t offer any proper criticisms before you post more.
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Yeah, I’m asking for ’MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAR’
Although, the warrior names. They are terrible. Just saying that now.
Jester?
Assassin?
Delta?
Etc.
War horse
Hoss
Backbreaker
Rondo
Maybe…
I don’t know if these are any good lol
Player warrior name.
Unicorn is pretty funny.
It appears this game is no longer in development. I’m closing the thread unless the author requests it to be reopened.