(WiP) A game about fighting in an arena


#1

I haven’t done a lot on it. Just the intro where you choose your name and all that. It’s my first game so I’m looking for criticism and advice.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/fpwwvchtolph1uz/mygame_complete.html?dl=0


#2

it look promising but its to short to judge so waiting for more to see how it goes also kind off a bummer that we didn’t fight the unicorn.

ps: give the game a name even if its temporarily makes it easier to remember.


#3

@djma46 Haha yeah, don’t worry you will fight Unicorn eventually. It’s 1.24 am where I am so I’m going to sleep but tomorrow (technically today) I’ll work on it some more and update it.


#4

So far i like what you so far I’m really interested to see what happens next


#5

You need some work on the fluency at the start, you use “You” way too many times in a row to start a sentence. I personally think you should do some work on that aswell


#6

It’s a good start, certainly, but I can’t offer any proper criticisms before you post more.

Yeah, I’m asking for ’MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAR’

Although, the warrior names. They are terrible. Just saying that now.


#7

@Eternalfire Thanks for the advice. I’ll fix that up.


#8

@Derpy Any name suggestions?


#9

Jester?

Assassin?

Delta?

Etc.


#10

War horse
Hoss
Backbreaker
Rondo

Maybe…
I don’t know if these are any good lol


#11

@Derpy Just to make sure, are you talking about your warrior name or Unicorn and Decapitator?


#12

Player warrior name.

Unicorn is pretty funny.


#14

It appears this game is no longer in development. I’m closing the thread unless the author requests it to be reopened.


#15