I thought their scene worked out fine, too! But I realize they can see a little one-dimensional there. I could be wrong, but I think I’ll just take another look at it. Thank you!!
Oh you’re a lifesaver… I’ve spent way too long on these forums forgetting about that. I am so sorry and thank you
Thank you for reading and for the lovely suggestions, too! Seeing these cool creatures I’ve never heard of is one of my favorite parts.
I understand that, too. Unfortunately I don’t have anyone close to me like that, so I think I really will change it just to be safe. I also loved your alternate suggestion though. If I do use it, would you like to be credited? If so, how?
Thank you so much for bringing this to my attention!!
No need to credit, it’s just a name.
And you’re welcome
Truly love the story <3<3<3
Ohhh this has potentialll!!
Carris is cringe
Long time no…anything! I wanted to apologize for that. I do recall mentioning that the end of the year would be a busy time, but I still want to say sorry and that I’m alive and well, just busy with college applications. I haven’t had a ton of energy to write, but I’ll try to get the chapter 2 updates done in January. Those updates include adding stat changes, Carris changes, overall writing/pacing changes, adding in some more positive/neutral choices, taking another look at RO meetings (particularly their energy), making your personality choice matter more, and other stuff.
I can’t give a good estimate on progress because I write best without stress/pressure and it’s a stressful time, but I still jot down ideas every couple of days and think about the story, even while inactive on the forums. I probably won’t post any more comments until the updates are finished, but I’m here!
TL;DR don’t hold your breath but it’s coming. Thank you so much for your patience and for reading!
Does the game has a tumbrl?
I’m enjoying this story so far! But would you concider adding another male RO? The current options don’t appeal to me (and almost feel too similar in personality). If not, then is it possible to complete the story without romancing them?
Not sure if this has been answered before but is the MC the only human ?
I believe they’re the only human. But they know about humans, so there might be some scattered around
If i remember correctly i think the author had an idea about the mc being like half blood human if we wanted to i think it’s mentioned in one of the first comments.
Found it comment 34 or 35.
Thanks so much, I had scrolled through the comments but it looks like I missed the comment where they said the Mc could be half blood
I’ve always loved Keys and finding this wip recently has brigthened my day.
I’m really enjoying this WIP
Take all the time you need