I’ve finally got an update out! It’s half of the first chapter, and gets all the way to the introduction of the second RO, hint- knock on the door if you want to meet him.
Unfortunately things are a bit slow going since I’m having some computer issues and having to replace parts. I was gonna wait til I had the entirety of the first chapter done before publishing but I have a few worries I’m going to lose all my work and my back ups will fail (and I can’t do much with a usb and a phone, so…).
Anyway, I editted the first post to show what’s updated. The second RO’s intro is a bit rough around the edges and I’m planning on tweaking it at least a little as I finish out the chapter.
If you guys wouldn’t mind keeping an eye out for certain things, I’d appreciate it. My concerns are-
1 Choices. I know there aren’t a lot of them, but I want to make sure they’re reasonable. Let me know, especially at any specific points if you feel there is another option you’d rather take, and I’ll look into including it.
2 For those that are checking out the Leander route, if you choose that you’re interested in him and make non-bad decisions (They should be pretty obvious so I’m not gonna list them all out), you end up seeing a few extra scenes. My worry is that it’s a bit too much in the beginning.
3. Also, considering how character focused I’m planning on making this, I’m wondering about how explicit I should make it be. It’s something that could be completely skippable but would probably land this game in the adult section.
Concerning romance! Another thread clued me in to something, and I want to make sure you guys are aware that you don’t have to say you’re interested in an RO right off the bat. If you don’t it’s not going to cut out the romance with them completely, you’ll have more options down the line. The only thing is you might miss out on some scenes. (though, romancing later might show a couple new scenes.
I’m not gonna hide this behind a spoiler because it’s something I would really love to hear everyone’s thoughts on- to be honest I’m a little lost on what I want to do as the traits/skills. I don’t particularly want to go the conventional route (Strength, charisma, etc), but I’m worried that the stats I do have might be underwhelming. So far the biggest ones come from the first question Leander asks you (the elemental one) but for the most part it’s more flavor text (how you react to things, or what the choice says (though the outcome remains the same) rather than have an emphasis on the story.
Currently, how I’m writing it I guess it plays out more like a story than a game (though the choices do matter, don’t imagine otherwise). Honestly I don’t mind writing it like this but I want to hear from you guys because I don’t want it to come off too easy or boring or something.