Ahem… did someone say slice of life? Ros who will swoon over your MC, and make it hard for you to choose just one?
Being a parent? Taking care of a kid? Managing your finances? Hookups with a barista and maybe a particular police officer?
There’s an angry neighbor to deal with… An ex/childhood friend who still has a thing for your MC… A cute co-work/boss romance… And that teacher who is not vanilla at all… let’s not forget the hunky neighbor who loves to bake muffins!
If you’re curious about all that… give this story a try.
This was fun to read and the characters are lovely It’s not too gamified (at least so far), which to me is perfect for a slice of life story. I’m eager to see more.
Typos I found
“The F-150 screams road domination. Nothing beats ridding such a monster. It is ready for all seasons and all type of roads. Just fasten the seatbelt of the little one in the back seat and you’re ready to go,” the salesman says.
Should be riding
You pay for your groceries and other purchase with the bill adding up to a raging $1,000. Then you drive home.
Should be purchases
Monday replied: Yes, what is your child name and how old?
Should be child’s
"My daughter’s name is Anna, and she’s seven.
Missing quotation mark at the end
The improvised dinner in the office was just your way to boost his moral.
Should be morale?
“Yes, but partnering with them would reach troubled kids worldwide. It would litterally make your platform international, and without borders.”
Should be literally
“It can be… sometimes,” you reply. “I would say that unhappy clients can be like crying kids throwing tantrums, so yes. It can be stress full.”
i really enjoyed this alot! i read through for a bit to get a feel of it and its such a nice read. i also choose a romance option on everyone just to try it out and i really like our co-worker/boss and the teacher. i was honestly not expecting how our ex/childhood friend to act so when they started spewing those overly confident words i was like yup not romancing you for now.
a question on the romance choices. is it advisable to gain a romance point for everyone or would that have some effect? also, for the neighbor, is it possible to accept their invite without getting a romance point for them?
i know its supposed to be pumpkin but pumkin sounds so fucking cute ngl.
anyways, would be restarting with a more serious route now that i have met all the ros. tbh its kinda tempting to romance the ex/childhood friend. the way they act is just a little too much for me. the banners are so cute looking and is very freshing to look at too
Thank you glad you like it. And thanks for the typos report those are very helpful.
Thanks for reading, romance points will unlock romance choices such as kisses and ROs POV. If you’re not romancing the ex/friend’s choices for them to kiss you on the sofa will be locked, and you will not see their POV either.
Thanks for the typo report “Pumkin” is def a typo lol I will fix that.
Thank you so much
One more thing about the romance points, for example, if you don’t have romance points with the teacher at the zoo they will only ask you for a date, but if you do have romance points with them, that scene plays out differently and you get to find out how naughty they are (hints you get to kiss them or outright slap them)
Honestly, I actually really like this WIP and concept.
It’s good, light-hearted fun and being able to do casual hookups in a Romance IF is surprisingly refreshing. Eliza and Willow are by far my favourite ROs so far and I kinda wanna get in a messy love triangle.
I hope the screenshots work.
Anyways, it’s really weird for me that my MC thinks about a cute neighbor or Antoine would be so suspicious if literally nothing is going on.
The reactions MC can have when he asks if they’re going out also read more like yes, we are, but it’s not your business. Unless you choose the one which gives a flirt point to him.
It’s especially jarring because my MC is not interested in women. But I chose female ROs so that I don’t fall into the pit of choosing flirt/ romance options for all the guys lol
I’m gonna continue playing now. Again I really like it, so good job so far
That ss sounds more like you flirted with (or have expressed interest in) Antoine, and are now worried that Eliza might flirt with him.
As it turns out, A is not a great person in their personal relationships (if they’re your ex, one of the options is that they cheated on you), and that apparently includes “possessiveness”. FUN! (but not really)
“You are the most skilled of swordswielders, perfecting it into an art where your body and your blade act in perfect balance. But can you balance… a CHECK BOOK? You have faced legions of mighty foes” in the field, but are you ready to face… THE HOMEOWNERS ASSOCIATION? Also, there’s a PTA meeting at end of workday today, you’re supposed to bring food, and nobody told you until two hours before the event."
This is when everybody learns that the greatest superhero is Donald Duck.
Contrary to what rich people will try to sell you, poor people are the absolute best at math. Nothing beats “and how many meals am I skipping this month to be able to make rent” to sharpen those arithmetic skills.