What things do stories do that break reader immersion

[N4MI]

@Konoi

So, my favorite kind of MC is someone who is shy and reserved and will combust if he’s in love, BUT who can get absolutely anything from anyone by sheer charm, as long as it’s not about real feelings. Basically, to have a shy and reserved MC but who is only so when it comes to their true feelings, while being a social butterfly because that’s a role, a play.

And this is why I love Wayhaven Chronicle because that game provide you shy flirting point!
Many readers favours to going in Morgan/Mason’s route as shy-flirt

Also I’ve seen other wip did this—but my memory issue is win again so I can’t remember the title. Wait, did The Soul Stone War does this as well? Idk.

But I’m sure I had read some COH/HG/Dashingdon WIP that have this feature.

[Konoi]

@N4MI

But I’m sure I had read some COH/HG/Dashingdon WIP that have this feature.

Yes, it’s getting more and more common, honestly. Though sometimes your character has to be generally shy to be able to shy-flirt / the shy-fllirt options increase the general shyness bar, instead of just affecting the way of flirting. That’s why I favor when games have separate bars for general shyness and for things flirt related. Or, as Wayhaven does, no bar at all for flirt related shyness in the main stats, just in the relationship segment with the chosen RO.
Supernatural In New York uses separate bars for these kinds of shyness too, and it’s glorious.