Voiceless: A Siren's Song (WIP)

[Fare]

I’ve begun work on my first game Voiceless: A Siren’s Song. In it, you start as a child, growing up in one of the most dangerous fields in the land- Beast Slaying.

Follow in your families footsteps, fall in love with 5 different love interests…one of them not even human, or create your own path.

This is my first choicescript game, so I’d appreciate any feedback good or bad. The first two chapters are still under HEAVY construction, with a lot of fleshing out that still needs to be done. But I appreciate any feedback or interest!

Currently it’s about 2 Chapters, but neither are complety done, and I plan on updating every 2 weeks.

To play the demo, go here: Voiceless: A Siren’s Song

What I’m working on currently

• Coding (ch 1 & 2)
• Finishing First Sea trip (ch 1)
• Finishing developing market trip (ch 1)
• Finishing Lux Interaction (ch 2)`

RO's

Lux
Rhydian
Jaecar
2 Hidden RO’s

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[Fredrick-No-E]

I can’t play through it all right now, but what I did see was good. I’ll definitely come back for the full demo.

[Fare]

Thank you for taking the time to read it!

[Mei_Hiroshi]

Hi!

[Fare]

Just fixed this! I forgot to add () around a variable.

[Hector_Lopez]

[Fare]

These should be fixed now!

[Anna_B]

I really like it so far! I would recommend using Grammarly. It’s a free website that checks for a bunch of small mistakes (spelling, grammar, etc.) Also, I found a few bugs:

[Bluebell336]

[stsword]

startup line 1364: It is illegal to fall out of a *choice statement; you must *goto or *finish before the end of the indented block.

[nulCat]

got a few errors (i didn’t post them because people have already posted the same errors i’ve gotten)
but other than that can i just say i love Bahari already ;o;

[Fare]

This should be fixed now!

[Fare]

Ahh Thank you! He’s one of my favorites to write honestly!

[Carloshmc2812]

Sounds like a really good story. It’s still very early days, but it’s u. Good start.

[love4tae]

error

i think someone already noticed this one,

[Graceful-Not]

I would suggest adding save slots. I’m the type of guy that likes to go through every option, and it gets a little tedious starting over all the time-

[FleurJane]

I can’t wait to read the rest of the demo. I keep running into errors or something? It doesn’t load for some reason.