Two things I noticed:
Most of the power abilities don’t actually deduct any energy, or in one case the wrong amount (5 instead of 8 iirc)
When the officer shoots you with the dart the condition for overcoming it is
*if Focus =5but one is only able to either obtain 3 or 8 focus, so that condition can’t be met.
(also I think there needs to be a space between the equals sign and the value. Not sure though, I’m not familiar with ChoiceScript)