Yah I know about it.
Vengeance-Your Revenge (WIP) ( Updated 18th April 2023 Word count-25k) ---Chapter 2 releasing
Guys rewriting of first chapter is complete now I just need to test the code before updating the demo. A lot of changes(more choices a lot more if ) have been made and I hope you will enjoy this newer version. Will try to update by tomorrow.
Will be expecting it. Already looking forward to it.
Now you will have a lot more characters than before 2 best friend character and 4 ROs also you will have the choice to either befriend them or make enemies.
Any description about them or still thinking?
What do you mean by description? You mean character description.
Your besties will be of the same gender as your MC.
Michael/Michele - Your childhood best friend
Ark-Your highschool companion / right hand man.
Their loyalties depends upon how you treat them.
And a new villain will come up. Though he is a secret.
Chapter 1 update will be up in 2 hours.
Made quite a few changes.
Many choices and a new mysterious angle to the story.
Guys the updated chapter 1 is released .I hope you enjoy it. Also I have decide to fix the genders of the ROs.
Now there are 2 female ROs and 1 male RO. I was facing a problem with the startup text so I made this decision.
Monica( 1st female RO)
Robbie(1st feamle RO)
Alexandra(2nd female RO)
and a sidekick character has been introduced Ad.
Ad’s gender is based on the players choice .
But remember Ad might turn out to be your bestie and spend a lot of your time so decide carefulloy.
Also I will advice you to use the positive choices because otherwise your MC might face a lot of problems in your upcoming chapters…
I hope everybody likes this chapter. And as usual you can give me feeedbacks and ask any questions you want.
@Crazerk I hope you will like this version of the Chapter 1 better than the last one. I have added a lot of choices and made it an if book as much as possible.
I think there is a bug. In the character customization if you choose brown skin it ends the game there. The other skin tones work.
Thank you @Hexager I will surely see to it. I might have missed it while checking for bugs.
There are a lot of typos. You should probably run in through a spell checker.
OK thanks for the feedback. Will do. I hope the story was to your liking.
So I wanted to ask did you people like the mystery angle I gave to the story. I would love some story feedbacks.
I am releasing the chapter 2 as I write and edit daily. And I think people will like if there is a back story or what tney call game world creation. I am currently working on it.
yeah I would like to see the world develop here. As for feedback storywise, I want to hold off any feedback till the story gets a bit longer. Tho I did see a few typos and a bug so i think that part needs work on
Yep there is one bug still and I am creating the world soon you will find a tumblr link and maybe more
Because i dunno how to embbed media so i gonna copy-paste it
Here’s the error i get
choicesscript_stats line 349: Non-existent variable ‘motherrelationship’
There are a few errors in today’s update
Don’t worry I will see to them.
@Shreyash_Chanda found this:
chapter2 line 18: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block