So far the demo starts off similarly to It’s Killing Time.
Unlike IKT, though, this feels a bit too rushed. Why are we after this guy? Just being sadistic isn’t much of an excuse if you don’t expand on it.
So far the demo starts off similarly to It’s Killing Time.
Unlike IKT, though, this feels a bit too rushed. Why are we after this guy? Just being sadistic isn’t much of an excuse if you don’t expand on it.
Didn’t I mention that he was corrupt?
And @RagEgnite, It’s rushed cause the real intro is still left.
Made a subtle change. Let’s see if you can spot it. I fulfilled your desires(By adding one line).
It’s looking better. I’m a little concerned about the use of a CO bomb, though. CO can kill quickly, but only if it’s very concentrated (maybe 1% of the air to act that quickly), which means that you’d need a lot of it to work. Also, this much could cause severe long-term poisoning in people nearby (and this is a party, so there are presumably quite a few of them), and I’d far prefer to play an assassin who only kills their target than a maniac who kills anyone and everyone they come across. I’m sure a smart assassin could work out other ways to kill their target.
Well, Dae was standing in his own private room. I forgot to mention that, sorry. I’ll add it.
I appreciate the shout out, I’ll totally check it out now while I have the time~
Being at a party thrown by the target makes for a more organic introduction to the MC’s profession as a hired assassin, I think. It’s a good addition.
That said I ran into a slight error once I picked the ‘Charm the guard’ option when it came time to board the plane. The MC compliments them saying “Looking good, my lady!” When the guard is a man, as denoted by the ‘he’ pronouns shortly after.
Oh Lord!I’m sorry, I messed up with variables!
Hahahah, if there was ever a time to mix those up, it’s here when your game is a WIP still and not yet published.
Fixed it!Check it out now!
Problem solved indeed! Thanks for the speedy response!
Yeah, chapter 1 will be out within, say a week.(Can’t promise)
Did anyone like the cover photo?
Oh! I didn’t see a cover photo. ^^;
Oh! Check it out on Dashingdon’s front page.
I created it using Canva.
Now I see it! That’s pretty nifty, reminds me of Hitman, which is very in keeping with the subject matter of the game.
Thanks for the compliment!
Well, it’s better, but I’d still prefer to check that he’d actually drunk the poison. (And if I’m the only other person in the room, is he just ignoring me?)
And I still think the character creation could be moved even further into the story…
Sorry for all the complaints…
Actually, a part of character creation is still left. And no problem at all, btw. Well I said that he was watching the snow fall outside, so the MC sneaked in.
Should I add stats about the MC’s personality?