Vendetta (WIP) (Chapter 6 Part 3 Updated on 7th November 2023) [325.3K Words Total])

Read kingdom and empires, the torture scene there is pretty great it can totally unnerved you

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Does anyone know if Patreon has an advanced demo?

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It gets updated first yeah. ATM it’s the same as the public demo because it just updated, but patreon gets the next one sooner.

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Good game, love Rin and Ash.

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Will there be an opportunity to save the character’s mother? Or she will die anyway.

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Thank you so much for mentioning Kingdoms and Empires !
This IF is not a gem, it’s a full treasure chest.
And another one added to my favorites IF :tada:

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This is rare and unique a RO that can feel jealousy.

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Evil mile morales

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Flirt simulator

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What happens in that second spiderverse movie?

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Spoiler

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can’t spoil lol, one of my fav movies to exist.

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Played up to chapter 4, loving most of what I’ve read. The only big hang up I have is that my MC went from deeply conflicted about whether or not to kill the Police Commissioner to smiling and joking around with Ash almost immediately after killing him. It made the prior scenes lose a lot of their impact in retrospect because all of that narrative weight resting on my character choosing to kill someone for the first time evaporates into thin air as Ash and the MC joke about landing the perfect headshot.

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Here is how I would justify it at least. While your character was deeply conflicted, actually choosing to go ahead with it in the end is proof that your character’s mind is made up. The rest is history. Still, I think I would have to go and read that part again. Unless I’m mistaken, I think it was Ash who cracked the jokes.

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This seems neat!

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true ash did start with it or lets more say she was amazed from it

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I love this game just one caveat tho I wish we could further customize our outfits. But so far this story is really really well done. I’m buying this as soon as it’s released :smiley:

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Honestly, we need more customization in body, outfit, usage of power, and personal weapons/equipments

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I think the customizations is good enough, anything more is gonna make it :exploding_head:, just sayin’ but if the author said they can handle it then :man_shrugging:.

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Yeah i fully agree, like it’s wild people want even more clothing options :sob: imagine having to track all of that

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