Awww thanks man. You’re about to give me an overdose of motivation with the reply. I really appreciate the feedback to know if I’m doing good or not.
As for the letter you have to look out for the options that appear before and after each race. I won’t tell you exactly who to look for, cause that would just spoil the fun .
About that, hmm. You’re not the first person to express disappointment in the fact that there aren’t any romance options, but I might consider it if more people bring up in the future. I really just wanted to finish the game quickly so I dropped romance because of how much extra branching there would be. Also I felt it wasn’t plausible enough given how little a time the MC has been in Los Santino. There’s only 30% of the game left to be written and coded.
I decided to pull the brakes on my other book, Hunter Sky, and come back with a much better remake. Why? Well, due to some constructive, almost negative, feedback I’ve been receiving about the book, I felt it was best to hit the drawing board and see where the book was coming up short. In doing so, I found a lot of things I didn’t like, being grammatical errors, mismatches, gender errors, odd dialogue(which I thought was ok but some say it’s unrealistic), too much reliance on the novel format that it was originally written as. But despite all of this, it’s still a work in progress, so things aren’t going to be perfect as yet.
i fine in a wip without romance not always needed but if you want ad in some RO point i wont say no, but i would wish more time with our brother , yeah he is on the run and always will be till the cops get him , but in my eyes he aint have enough screen time for being our brother find him more a stranger than close family
My guy, we become a 16 years old illegal street racer on our first day of school. And I’ll be goddamned if finding love ain’t plausible when we can basically break into a police station and steal a sweet ass ride. So while I’ll force an author to include ROs if they don’t want to, I will strongly advise aka pathetically beg to reconsider because these characters are something special. Except Brock. Fuck Brock. Bro thinks he’s him when we pummeled him and outraced his ass without NoS.
Also, I feel that. I just started reading Hunter Sky and I’ve been enjoying the hell out of it just as much as Velocity. Lea is fucking hilarious how she’s super duper nice but on god she will make a mf eat dirt if you hit her with some sexist bullshit. Also, Jirell is a total fucking Sasuke but I love him for it. Best frenemies till the end! Whatever you decide to do, just know you’ve earned yourself a dedicated reader. You’ve got the imagination to write and the zeal to actually write. You got this!
Yea, deff add romance & hookups dude. It’s weird that the other guys get action, but the MC doesn’t. Makes him seem like a loser. He’s a racer & criminal. He should be gettin a ton of attention from girls, especially if he’s a winner.
Fun game. I will note in chapter 6 the hang out with someone and put together a team options start to loop rather than progress and the demo spazzed out at chapter 7.
I did quite enjoy playing the Fast and the Furious the RPG though because its all about family.
And no interest from guys at all? For mine that would be more of a nightmare than success, considering he already has the interest of at least one girl. Yes, she’s going to like who she likes but I hope it won’t be only girls who like male mc and that male mc hasn’t really gotten the short end of the stick compared to Shawn.
Ooooh I like this story! Gonna follow this my fav line is already “Man screw you! Freddie Krueger lookin ass heffa! That makeup can’t hide your ugliness. Talk’n bout my rap is wack, no YOU wack!”
well I’m glad you enjoyed the game my guy/girl. I’m not that good at comedy or one liners but I’m glad you found that humorous. I appreciate the support!
Uh… what? You mean Amaya the girl who isn’t even a legit RO? Jason has repeatedly hinted at wanting to take her for himself. Dude gets all the girls. Hate that guy.
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