Velocity: The Race Begins (WIP) 140k+ words

Ok! First of all, this is easily one of the most interesting IFs I’ve read so far on this platform. The author is doing a great job and I’m really looking forward and hyped to see what more does he have planned for both of his works.

One thing I would like to add here would be the fact that ever since that scene where we were given the choice to kiss Amaya, I believe that there is more than enough potential and room for the MC to start a potential romance with Amaya as there has been a very intimate bond shown between them. Moreover, even if Matthias does have a crush on Amaya; considering the fact that he’s really anxious and socially awkward, the MC should at least be given a choice to either romance Amaya themselves or to help Matthias by becoming their wingman in accomplishing his romantic endeavor.

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Jason, Matt…Amaya does not lack for suitors but the guy she happens to like, in the case of my mc at least, is gay. :sweat_smile:

My mc would like some positive attention from hot guys himself…eh, maybe in velocity 2 then. :sweat_smile:

Gay mc does not have the possibility, assuming straight mc will get it with Amaya.

Brock and Jason don’t seem to be poor, goes for Britney as well…poverty right now seems to be more of a thing of our little gang.

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I’m not really surprised by the lack of genuine romance in this story since it gives off Euphoria vibes. Personally, I imagine everybody just hooking up and sleeping around to feel a little more alive in their cesspool of teenage angst, gang relations and poverty.

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alrr thank you so js wait?

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Man I just waiting for the day when I get a chance to kill jason and broke I swear!!! I am gonna be full walter white when killing these shitheads now amaya well the ro is very fast it has potential maybe love triangle with Mathias but I think author should add more ro

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I saw you finally made a patreont broski kudos. Loving the new store by the way. Can you add fight scenes to it where we get to kick ass and do some badassery

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Well, I guess I could do something like that. So that would be a game where you to become a rapper from zero? It’s a very interesting idea so I’ll add it to my project queue.

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Thanks for joining the Patreon! And I do have some action scenes planned so no worries. I got you!

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I was recently playing Sky Vs Hunter and was interested in that and now this one I’m very interested in. I get that fast and furious style vide from it.

I was wondering if you can beat Brock in the first race or not? Or we just get that early years Paul Walker vide R.I.P

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There is no way to beat brock in the first race you can however be leading all the way up until the end.

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Next update when???

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For a moment I read “raping game” and I was like “What the fuck???”

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Don’t worry lads and laddies, you’ll get your revenge in due time😈. . . .

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:rofl::rofl::rofl::sweat_smile::sweat_smile: Well darn. Wouldn’t that be something if someone actually made a game like that. What would the plot even be about? :rofl:

You made me spill my coffee with that reply :joy:.

Sorry😔. For now I won’t post anymore chapters here since there’s only about thirty percent left. After I finish the last couple chapters I’ll do some testing and it’ll be ready soon.

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Thank you

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Did anyone earn Matthias respect?

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Omg I’m coding rn (technically I’m bs-ing on the forums at the exact moment … lol) but I will be coming back to this, it sounds so interesting!!!

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That’s also what I meant to ask will we get more cars later to race with or be able to change it because I was stuck riding the Porsche 911 Turbo S. I wanted that sweet Scarface Lamborghini or the Lotus.

The only other thing I want was they car pink slips so we could use the parts to fine tune our own cars or give to Lakeem to pay him back a car or just keep it

That’s why I’m like i really love this game it really got a lot of great mechanics and aspects to it like all your games always has.

Thank you for always making this amazing games and bring my creativity up again. You are very appreciated and very talented.

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If I remember right you have to go to the mechanic shop and talk with him each time then he comes to like you

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